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Forum: Literature & Lyrics 10-28-2008, 01:07 PM
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Posted By notnotjester589
Thanks for the help...Now comes figuring out the...

Thanks for the help...Now comes figuring out the music...
Forum: Guitar 10-22-2008, 03:11 PM
Replies: 26
Views: 884
Posted By notnotjester589
Thank you....That helps a lot...Exactly what I...

Thank you....That helps a lot...Exactly what I needed to know
Forum: Guitar 10-22-2008, 01:48 PM
Replies: 26
Views: 884
Posted By notnotjester589
Well to an extent but like i said its been awhile...

Well to an extent but like i said its been awhile since i dealt with theory...On a basic level we have major HAPPY with a major 3rd and minor SAD with a minor third lol
Forum: Guitar 10-22-2008, 01:13 PM
Replies: 26
Views: 884
Posted By notnotjester589
I believe so...I never really wrote it all down...

I believe so...I never really wrote it all down so I don't know the specifics but lets just assume they are...unless they can't be lol
Forum: Guitar 10-22-2008, 01:03 PM
Replies: 26
Views: 884
Posted By notnotjester589
Had to wiki that lol

Had to wiki that lol
Forum: Guitar 10-22-2008, 12:55 PM
Replies: 26
Views: 884
Posted By notnotjester589
Chord Progression?

I feel like an idiot asking this for some reason lol...I have some chord progressions I've been playing around with and something just seems wrong, like out of key. It seems like the key of G to me...
Forum: Audio Arena 10-21-2008, 12:47 PM
Replies: 0
Views: 230
Posted By notnotjester589
It's What's Left

New song demo I put together...Don't really know what else to say...I'm kind of interested in what you may think of the lyrics and the repetition of them...Any kind of input would be very...
Forum: Rock & Metal 10-16-2008, 09:48 AM
Replies: 229
Views: 6,057
Posted By notnotjester589
I'm going to go with Tom Waits, Rush and Fall Out...

I'm going to go with Tom Waits, Rush and Fall Out Boy.
Forum: Literature & Lyrics 09-08-2008, 11:01 AM
Replies: 2
Views: 235
Posted By notnotjester589
Haha...You nailed the Billy Joel thing to...

Haha...You nailed the Billy Joel thing to me...Couldn't read it without thinking that...I liked it and I bet she'll most definitely appreciate it...Only thing is in a few places the wording seems...
Forum: Literature & Lyrics 09-08-2008, 08:27 AM
Replies: 4
Views: 507
Posted By notnotjester589
Yeah I can see what you are saying...This was...

Yeah I can see what you are saying...This was basically a flow of thought piece that all came out over the course of few minutes sitting outside the library at good old penn state university...Tried...
Forum: Literature & Lyrics 09-06-2008, 04:29 PM
Replies: 1
Views: 235
Posted By notnotjester589
finding myself is a problem that I come across ...

finding myself is a problem that I come across
when everything seems to die on me.
Even though this was created to help me
I still find myself miles off.

Really like that section...The only...
Forum: Literature & Lyrics 09-04-2008, 10:15 AM
Replies: 1
Views: 187
Posted By notnotjester589
I would maybe expand on how you are so used to...

I would maybe expand on how you are so used to the mistakes you've made, other than just saying they aren't new. Other than that, decent first attempt and keep it going.
Forum: Literature & Lyrics 09-04-2008, 10:13 AM
Replies: 4
Views: 334
Posted By notnotjester589
I don't think its the big words, its just the...

I don't think its the big words, its just the fact the words you chose obscure whatever meaning is there (if there is a specific meaning). Maybe just attempting to change how you word or say things...
Forum: Literature & Lyrics 09-04-2008, 10:11 AM
Replies: 3
Views: 314
Posted By notnotjester589
I like it..It's short, but why add all the fat...

I like it..It's short, but why add all the fat that will just be trimmed off later anyway. I think you could probably expand this quite easily if you wanted to. I could also see this working as an...
Forum: Literature & Lyrics 09-04-2008, 10:06 AM
Replies: 4
Views: 507
Posted By notnotjester589
No Title As Of Yet...

I haven't been around in a while but I have some free time now and feel like getting into the game again. Here is something I wrote a little while ago. It might be worthless but hey, getting...
Forum: Literature & Lyrics 03-14-2008, 05:04 PM
Replies: 4
Views: 330
Posted By notnotjester589
I'll definitely take that into...

I'll definitely take that into consideration...Thanks for the feedback again
Forum: Literature & Lyrics 03-09-2008, 09:09 PM
Replies: 11
Views: 355
Posted By notnotjester589
I'm going to have to agree with it being...

I'm going to have to agree with it being cliche...The pool of tears, downward spiral etc...It's been done to death in this way...Coming up with a new way to frame it may make it a little different...
Forum: Literature & Lyrics 03-09-2008, 06:58 PM
Replies: 4
Views: 330
Posted By notnotjester589
Yeah, I've been told that about the vocals...I...

Yeah, I've been told that about the vocals...I actually like it with the effect lol...I was trying to get toward the sound of John Frusciante's solo stuff with that...Not exactly there yet...I'll...
Forum: Literature & Lyrics 03-09-2008, 06:38 PM
Replies: 4
Views: 330
Posted By notnotjester589
Away V2

Little song I wrote that I would love some feedback on...Be willing to take a look at anyone else's stuff too if you'd like.

You can find a recording of it over at http://www.myspace.com/luvpump
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Forum: Audio Arena 03-09-2008, 06:32 PM
Replies: 0
Views: 182
Posted By notnotjester589
Luv Pump - Away V2 (Acoustic Version)

Hey, I just recorded a version of a song I've had around awhile called Away that I think I would like some feedback on. Really would appreciate it if you told me what you thought about this or one...
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