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Forum: Literature & Lyrics 01-03-2007, 12:47 PM
Replies: 7,389
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Posted By RollerQueen
I'm writing a novel. I'll be back later on at...

I'm writing a novel. I'll be back later on at some point, maybe once commencement's over in May. Take care, kids.
Forum: Literature & Lyrics 01-01-2007, 12:00 AM
Replies: 7,389
Views: 295,931
Posted By RollerQueen
In case you have forgotten, I hate you all.

In case you have forgotten, I hate you all.
Forum: Literature & Lyrics 12-30-2006, 09:44 PM
Replies: 2
Views: 262
Posted By RollerQueen
Lay off the pseudo-intellectual and over-the-top...

Lay off the pseudo-intellectual and over-the-top phrasings, Joycian man. You've gotten better at that, though, and some of that stuff works, like "omnicompetence" and the line "Bees sting the wings...
Forum: Guitar 12-21-2006, 08:39 PM
Replies: 13
Views: 409
Posted By RollerQueen
Thanks for informing me about how utterly...

Thanks for informing me about how utterly ignorant I am about all of this. It saves me needless spending.

6V6... Alright. Another local music shop is run by a tube amp specialist. I'll ask him...
Forum: Guitar 12-21-2006, 05:49 PM
Replies: 13
Views: 409
Posted By RollerQueen
EHX Tubes

Hi, anyone who can help. Hi, anyone else. I have a Fender Hot Rod Deluxe (40w 1x12) with its stock white Groove Tubes in and am looking for something hotter, something gutsier. My boss at the...
Forum: Literature & Lyrics 08-29-2006, 09:34 PM
Replies: 8
Views: 365
Posted By RollerQueen
I still can't stand your misuse of punctuation. ...

I still can't stand your misuse of punctuation.

Sad. The only thing that's decent is the couplet, and that still needs some work. The mechanism (swinging back and forth) for both objects is the...
Forum: Literature & Lyrics 08-28-2006, 08:15 PM
Replies: 8
Views: 365
Posted By RollerQueen
You get an exhausted black dot. w00t0rz

You get an exhausted black dot. w00t0rz
Forum: Literature & Lyrics 08-27-2006, 11:48 PM
Replies: 12
Views: 619
Posted By RollerQueen
It's all good. Your crit has been returned. ...

It's all good. Your crit has been returned. Take care.
Forum: Literature & Lyrics 08-27-2006, 11:48 PM
Replies: 16
Views: 441
Posted By RollerQueen
Hm... This is alright... It seems like you're...

Hm... This is alright... It seems like you're being too intense about it, though. Vocabulary's fine, but do you need to be so elegant with this sort of subject matter? You come off as pompous,...
Forum: Literature & Lyrics 08-27-2006, 08:30 AM
Replies: 12
Views: 619
Posted By RollerQueen
The second verse IS talking about a man whore. I...

The second verse IS talking about a man whore. I don't like talking about politics because almost anyone who takes sides does so with incredibly limited knowledge.

Thanks. Take care. I'll...
Forum: Literature & Lyrics 08-26-2006, 01:36 AM
Replies: 12
Views: 619
Posted By RollerQueen
I'm leaving MX again for a while, so I'll see you...

I'm leaving MX again for a while, so I'll see you people later. Take care. Any final crits for this will be returned, but whatever.
Forum: Literature & Lyrics 08-25-2006, 12:37 AM
Replies: 2
Views: 236
Posted By RollerQueen
I was going to be nice and tell you that there's...

I was going to be nice and tell you that there's only one song allowed per post and one song per day, but you've been here for a year. With that said, you're a retard. Later, person with an extra...
Forum: Literature & Lyrics 08-24-2006, 01:33 AM
Replies: 1
Views: 264
Posted By RollerQueen
One song per thread and one thread per day (for...

One song per thread and one thread per day (for future reference).
Forum: Literature & Lyrics 08-22-2006, 01:53 AM
Replies: 12
Views: 619
Posted By RollerQueen
Like I said, this is a SIMPLE SONG. I get fed up...

Like I said, this is a SIMPLE SONG. I get fed up with myself and my constant attempts at "serious" subject matter. The lyrics aren't very deep, and the music is just a bunch of chords in the key of...
Forum: Literature & Lyrics 08-22-2006, 01:37 AM
Replies: 5
Views: 377
Posted By RollerQueen
This had no love, so I'll change that... Also,...

This had no love, so I'll change that... Also, you live about 45 minutes away from me, and about 15 minutes from my old house. Weird.

I dont know if it's poetic license or laziness, but the lack...
Forum: Literature & Lyrics 08-20-2006, 09:55 PM
Replies: 12
Views: 619
Posted By RollerQueen
The Merry Highwayman

This is a song about how I got in a fight with some hooker in Philadelphia when I asked her what she was doing with her life and how her current course of actions justifies her future aspirations. ...
Forum: Literature & Lyrics 08-20-2006, 08:51 PM
Replies: 3
Views: 355
Posted By RollerQueen
Is this an alteration of that piece you sent me...

Is this an alteration of that piece you sent me last month?

"loop-taped sunrise" made my nerdness smile. The "fallen leaves" concept is overdone by lesser writers, and I'm guessing you know that...
Forum: Literature & Lyrics 08-15-2006, 12:46 PM
Replies: 3
Views: 355
Posted By RollerQueen
Blacks and dots.

Blacks and dots.
Forum: Literature & Lyrics 08-14-2006, 04:20 PM
Replies: 11
Views: 513
Posted By RollerQueen
It's all good, homey. You're not me, and I'm...

It's all good, homey. You're not me, and I'm weird, so it happens. Take care.

Any last ones before I post that other piece that I mentioned in the introductory statement? Kill whitey.
Forum: Literature & Lyrics 08-13-2006, 04:57 PM
Replies: 11
Views: 513
Posted By RollerQueen
Subtle, fair enough. Not ATD-I. It isn't...

Subtle, fair enough.

Not ATD-I. It isn't esoteric enough to be ATD-I.

Yeah, the "circus" thing isn't something that I so much gave a passing thought to in writing this, so bollocks on that. ...
Forum: Literature & Lyrics 08-13-2006, 04:48 PM
Replies: 6
Views: 393
Posted By RollerQueen
Hm........ The apostrophes almost make this...

Hm........

The apostrophes almost make this sound like a country song, and the "deeper" thing does call Dylan to mind, and "Storm" is close to "Hurricane," though this song doesn't seem to be...
Forum: Literature & Lyrics 08-12-2006, 10:57 PM
Replies: 11
Views: 417
Posted By RollerQueen
Hey now... You're making me sad and feel like an...

Hey now... You're making me sad and feel like an idiot.
Forum: Literature & Lyrics 08-12-2006, 02:11 AM
Replies: 11
Views: 513
Posted By RollerQueen
Oh, yeah, that... It's a tension-breaker. If...

Oh, yeah, that... It's a tension-breaker. If you want to be all artsy and complex, the Beatles reference is to acknowledge that it's impossible to permanently change the world. I mean, even Hitler...
Forum: Literature & Lyrics 08-12-2006, 12:25 AM
Replies: 11
Views: 513
Posted By RollerQueen
Thank you... I'll change it a little bit. Maybe...

Thank you... I'll change it a little bit. Maybe I should have "lame" instead of "slain." That would accomplish more for what I intend, as truth is not dead as per this piece... Thanks. I...
Forum: Literature & Lyrics 08-12-2006, 12:19 AM
Replies: 9
Views: 291
Posted By RollerQueen
Hey there. Sorry about our imbroglio and whatnot...

Hey there. Sorry about our imbroglio and whatnot in my old song.

The carpe diem sentiment of the chorus is fair enough, but it doesn't bring anything new to the theme. As a chorus, as a focal...
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