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Forum: Literature & Lyrics 01-14-2009, 09:11 PM
Replies: 9
Views: 412
Posted By camdizzle
That definitely changes the way I read them. I...

That definitely changes the way I read them. I originally thought it was one poem entitled "a couple," but they make a lot more sense now. I really like the rhythm of the first one but the second...
Forum: Literature & Lyrics 01-14-2009, 08:54 PM
Replies: 9
Views: 412
Posted By camdizzle
I like 'em. Are they supposed to be connected?

I like 'em. Are they supposed to be connected?
Forum: Literature & Lyrics 01-14-2009, 08:42 PM
Replies: 9
Views: 717
Posted By camdizzle
Not bad, but a bit unfocused. You have some...

Not bad, but a bit unfocused. You have some great lines/stanzas in there, but they end up getting lost in more cliche lines or contradicting imagery later on. In some spots it's like you're...
Forum: Literature & Lyrics 01-14-2009, 08:18 PM
Replies: 6
Views: 436
Posted By camdizzle
It starts pretty boring, and I was afraid this...

It starts pretty boring, and I was afraid this was going to turn out shallow and unimpressive, but I ended up really liking it. I say this because you're structure and introduction of the metaphors...
Forum: Literature & Lyrics 01-18-2008, 03:37 PM
Replies: 6
Views: 437
Posted By camdizzle
I see your point, but I think you're taking it a...

I see your point, but I think you're taking it a bit too seriously. If you want it in serious terms, the "SHUT THE **** UP..." line is a sever contrast to the beauty outside. My mood vs. thiers. My...
Forum: Literature & Lyrics 01-13-2008, 02:53 PM
Replies: 5
Views: 466
Posted By camdizzle
I laughed, I cried... beautiful

I laughed, I cried... beautiful
Forum: Alternative & Indie 01-11-2008, 05:33 PM
Replies: 35
Views: 1,297
Posted By camdizzle
For an ape with downs syndrome, sure

For an ape with downs syndrome, sure
Forum: Alternative & Indie 01-11-2008, 03:39 AM
Replies: 36
Views: 1,364
Posted By camdizzle
I'm not gonna lie, I didn't really get Strawberry...

I'm not gonna lie, I didn't really get Strawberry Jam
Forum: Alternative & Indie 01-11-2008, 03:38 AM
Replies: 122
Views: 3,741
Posted By camdizzle
Limp Bizkit- Nookie ...it was a...

Limp Bizkit- Nookie




...it was a very dark time in my life
Forum: Alternative & Indie 01-11-2008, 03:36 AM
Replies: 35
Views: 1,297
Posted By camdizzle
Top 5 Least Favorite Voices

Pretty self-explanatory

1. Tim Armstrong
2. Sammy Hagar
3. Axl Rose
4. Kim Gordon
5. Chris Carrabba
Forum: Literature & Lyrics 01-11-2008, 03:30 AM
Replies: 9
Views: 496
Posted By camdizzle
First of all, spell out your words because you...

First of all, spell out your words because you look like a god damn moron writing 'n e' help. Sorry to be harsh, but no one will take you seriously if you type like a 12 year old girl on instant...
Forum: Literature & Lyrics 01-11-2008, 03:26 AM
Replies: 6
Views: 437
Posted By camdizzle
Passion at Night

Outside, two lovers embrace.
Passion meets passion as their eyes close.
Unable to physically see, their senses are
Replaced by pure emotion and true
Fulfillment, as the human need for desire is...
Forum: Lyrical Challenges 01-11-2008, 03:23 AM
Replies: 12
Views: 1,118
Posted By camdizzle
lol bowl of oranges, you took that way to...

lol bowl of oranges, you took that way to seriously. It was supposed to be a joke.

Votes to come...
Forum: Alternative & Indie 01-09-2008, 01:08 AM
Replies: 24
Views: 1,034
Posted By camdizzle
http://www.keytarmusic.com/images/Magic_PtMugu84.G...

http://www.keytarmusic.com/images/Magic_PtMugu84.GIF


Also: http://www.keytarmusic.com/images/KeyWallStu.JPG
Forum: Literature & Lyrics 01-09-2008, 12:57 AM
Replies: 10
Views: 475
Posted By camdizzle
I like it. No criticism for now

I like it. No criticism for now
Forum: Literature & Lyrics 01-05-2008, 01:20 PM
Replies: 15
Views: 714
Posted By camdizzle
The structure is good. It's repetitive, but you...

The structure is good. It's repetitive, but you might be able to make it work. Your lines are what kill you.



all of these are just really... lame I guess. There isn't much depth when you...
Forum: Alternative & Indie 01-04-2008, 02:40 AM
Replies: 58
Views: 1,407
Posted By camdizzle
The Beatles- Sergeant Pepper's Lonely Hearts Club...

The Beatles- Sergeant Pepper's Lonely Hearts Club Band

1. When I'm 64
2. She's Leaving Home
3. Being for the Benefit of Mr. Kite!

this is pretty hard. I usually only dislike one or two songs...
Forum: Alternative & Indie 01-03-2008, 09:26 PM
Replies: 23
Views: 976
Posted By camdizzle
Sonic Nurse is produced really well

Sonic Nurse is produced really well
Forum: Lyrical Challenges 01-03-2008, 02:08 AM
Replies: 7
Views: 1,152
Posted By camdizzle
Passion at Night Outside, two lovers...

Passion at Night

Outside, two lovers embrace.
Passion meets passion as their eyes close.
Unable to physically see, their senses are
Replaced by pure emotion and true fulfillment,
As the human...
Forum: Punk 01-02-2008, 06:22 PM
Replies: 188
Views: 7,337
Posted By camdizzle
I don't know how familiar you guys are with...

I don't know how familiar you guys are with Nothing Nice, but this is pretty silly Misfits humor...

http://www.mitchclem.com/nothingnice/172/

The story line goes back a couple strips if you...
Forum: Literature & Lyrics 01-02-2008, 06:05 PM
Replies: 15
Views: 494
Posted By camdizzle
I agree. For a song, it ultimately doesn't...

I agree. For a song, it ultimately doesn't matter how well the words are written if they don't fit with the music
Forum: Literature & Lyrics 01-02-2008, 06:02 PM
Replies: 5
Views: 342
Posted By camdizzle
To the what? As for the rest of it, I agree...

To the what?

As for the rest of it, I agree with SugarCoatedSour. It's an interesting thesis if people are talking about the dynamics of an argument, but it doesn't really speak to me on a...
Forum: Alternative & Indie 01-01-2008, 11:57 PM
Replies: 44
Views: 1,932
Posted By camdizzle
somebody compare wilco to someone i would know ...

somebody compare wilco to someone i would know

*guess*
Forum: Literature & Lyrics 01-01-2008, 11:52 PM
Replies: 18
Views: 758
Posted By camdizzle
I don't get it :/

I don't get it :/
Forum: Literature & Lyrics 01-01-2008, 11:48 PM
Replies: 5
Views: 399
Posted By camdizzle
yeah, I agree. I think "****" almost takes away...

yeah, I agree. I think "****" almost takes away from the imagery you establish. Unless you were trying to be ironic, in that case I guess I didn't really get it.
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