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Forum: Literature & Lyrics 10-23-2012, 10:06 AM
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Posted By Blind
hmm

hmm
Forum: Literature & Lyrics 10-22-2012, 09:23 PM
Replies: 26
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Posted By Blind
sooo do either of you have any specific...

sooo do either of you have any specific criticisms that you'd like to share? cuz right now we're at "the rhymes suck and the poem sucks"
Forum: Literature & Lyrics 10-22-2012, 04:34 PM
Replies: 26
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Posted By Blind
idk i usually like rhyming. it makes writing...

idk i usually like rhyming. it makes writing more of a challenge. i feel more accomplished after writing something i like that adheres to a strict rhyme scheme or syllabic structure or somethin. ...
Forum: Literature & Lyrics 10-04-2012, 01:22 PM
Replies: 26
Views: 3,233
Posted By Blind
sewn

i'm not sure what i'm actually gonna title this yet. these are the lyrics to a song i wrote


oh, seraph from above came down
her fire burned brightly through her gown
my heart is not my own...
Forum: Literature & Lyrics 10-04-2012, 01:14 PM
Replies: 23
Views: 6,228
Posted By Blind
"puffy red eyes brow furrowed blindly whimpering...

"puffy red eyes brow furrowed blindly whimpering like a child jaw shaking voice unsteadily falling its way down into cracked and broken syllables punctuated by sobs"

i really like this line. very...
Forum: Help/Bugs/Suggestions 11-29-2011, 03:01 PM
Replies: 241
Views: 18,843
Posted By Blind
LPs 1_BadBadNotGood_BBNG 2_Bon Iver_Bon...

LPs

1_BadBadNotGood_BBNG
2_Bon Iver_Bon Iver, Bon Iver
3_The Dear Hunter_The Color Spectrum
4_La Dispute_Wildlife
5_Laura Stevenson & the Cans_Sit Resist
6_Owen_Ghost Town
7_Protest the...
Forum: Rock & Metal 02-26-2011, 10:24 PM
Replies: 5,110
Views: 176,058
Posted By Blind
@Tyler I know they're from Whitby, but isn't...

@Tyler

I know they're from Whitby, but isn't that like just outside Toronto? And Oshawa's sold out too


Anyone else think that either Hair-Trigger or Dunsel would have been a better album...
Forum: Community: Music/Off-Topic 02-24-2011, 07:22 PM
Replies: 13
Views: 577
Posted By Blind
i dun it

i dun it
Forum: Rock & Metal 02-24-2011, 06:41 PM
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Views: 176,058
Posted By Blind
I was planning on making the 3 hour drive up to...

I was planning on making the 3 hour drive up to Toronto to see their hometown show, but it apparently sold out within a few days, along with the rest of Canada
Forum: Rock & Metal 02-20-2011, 07:28 PM
Replies: 5,110
Views: 176,058
Posted By Blind
Tie between Hair-Trigger, Dunsel, and Termites...

Tie between Hair-Trigger, Dunsel, and Termites for me
Forum: Rock & Metal 02-20-2011, 02:51 PM
Replies: 5,110
Views: 176,058
Posted By Blind
I'm somewhere between 10 and 15 listens in and...

I'm somewhere between 10 and 15 listens in and the only song I can't seem to get into is Moonlight.
Forum: Literature & Lyrics 01-03-2011, 02:41 AM
Replies: 2
Views: 302
Posted By Blind
I feel like the first three stanzas are more him...

I feel like the first three stanzas are more him rationalizing his thoughts to himself and for himself, where the last one is the culmination of his thoughts into an overwhelming, more definitive...
Forum: Literature & Lyrics 12-31-2010, 01:40 PM
Replies: 2
Views: 302
Posted By Blind
2 pieces

I posted this one a few months ago I believe, and I've revised it since. It now has a definite rhyme scheme (A-B-C-A and A-B-C-B for the ending section), and a strict syllabic structure.


Under...
Forum: Drums & Percussion 10-29-2010, 05:54 PM
Replies: 143
Views: 9,642
Posted By Blind
No Jon Karel?? ...

No Jon Karel??

http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=FeVG8qwaoZ8
Forum: Literature & Lyrics 10-27-2010, 09:07 PM
Replies: 5
Views: 440
Posted By Blind
Thanks for the feedback Yeah, i guess it's...

Thanks for the feedback

Yeah, i guess it's similar to opiate, but i really hear an anti-religious message in opiate. i have no problem with religion, but i find it ridiculous when outdated...
Forum: Literature & Lyrics 10-26-2010, 08:36 PM
Replies: 5
Views: 440
Posted By Blind
yeah i have trouble forming metaphors using...

yeah i have trouble forming metaphors using simple phrasings

my original goal was actually to try and convey my message without resorting to uncommon vocabulary, but it wasn't coming the way i...
Forum: Literature & Lyrics 10-24-2010, 09:12 PM
Replies: 5
Views: 440
Posted By Blind
Pandora

Everything falls into place
One by one, sporadically spiraling,
Earthbound

Under influence of history's messianic kings,
Archaic ideas infect through hand of creation,
Reaching from beyond our...
Forum: Literature & Lyrics 08-18-2010, 09:49 PM
Replies: 2
Views: 442
Posted By Blind
lol

lol
Forum: Literature & Lyrics 04-29-2010, 05:40 PM
Replies: 8
Views: 748
Posted By Blind
The last two lines are my fav. part =D

The last two lines are my fav. part =D
Forum: Alternative & Indie 04-27-2010, 08:13 PM
Replies: 27
Views: 2,322
Posted By Blind
I like them for the personal, heartfelt lyrics ...

I like them for the personal, heartfelt lyrics

Jesse has a really expressive voice too
Forum: Literature & Lyrics 04-27-2010, 08:02 PM
Replies: 1
Views: 468
Posted By Blind
Rain? I guess

Rain
Wash away the dirt, run through the ruins of this place
Water droplets make for a million suspended prisms
Casting their brilliance
Across the harsh grey walls
Rain
Open up the heavens,...
Forum: Rock & Metal 04-27-2010, 07:59 PM
Replies: 2,135
Views: 55,564
Posted By Blind
Colors. I discovered them as Colors was about to...

Colors. I discovered them as Colors was about to be released, so that's what I've listened to. Probably would have been Silent Circus if for nothing but the nostalgia had I found them earlier
Forum: Rock & Metal 04-27-2010, 07:31 PM
Replies: 86
Views: 3,844
Posted By Blind
Arif Mirabdolbaghi of PtH is pretty great ...

Arif Mirabdolbaghi of PtH is pretty great

"All the young people who took a leap of no faith in a riverbed
That drowns about as much as it saves
Cuffing down on ground against the cries of...
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