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Forum: Help/Bugs/Suggestions 04-02-2008, 01:47 PM
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Views: 37,439
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All my album ratings on the review site have...

All my album ratings on the review site have vanished for the second time in a period of a couple months. What is causing this?
Forum: Pop-Punk 07-12-2007, 12:54 PM
Replies: 41
Views: 1,369
Posted By HorrorBusiness78
I liked them better when they were starting to...

I liked them better when they were starting to get heavier with DTLI and Chuck. Those albums were really good. The new songs sound kind of like more AKNF which i thought they had moved on from....
Forum: Literature & Lyrics 07-31-2006, 08:37 PM
Replies: 2
Views: 310
Posted By HorrorBusiness78
Me and a friend share this username to have our...

Me and a friend share this username to have our songs for our band critiqued. this is my friend's song that he wrote not too long ago. I think you gave it a fare assessment though. He'll probably...
Forum: Literature & Lyrics 07-30-2006, 12:28 AM
Replies: 31
Views: 740
Posted By HorrorBusiness78
I love to write so the listener can decide for...

I love to write so the listener can decide for themselves what the meaning is. It gives the song so many more ways of reaching people than one single meaning that is blatant. I really liked this...
Forum: Literature & Lyrics 07-29-2006, 11:47 PM
Replies: 2
Views: 310
Posted By HorrorBusiness78
The Sea Will Always Catch Me

One night alone
I took my memories
Sins to atone
And sights to open seas

One night alone
I thought of my lost past
Sands were blown
Waters rising fast
Forum: Literature & Lyrics 07-30-2005, 11:56 PM
Replies: 9
Views: 477
Posted By HorrorBusiness78
thank you i did yours too

thank you i did yours too
Forum: Literature & Lyrics 07-30-2005, 02:49 PM
Replies: 10
Views: 446
Posted By HorrorBusiness78
You’ve just asked a pertinent question, Just...

You’ve just asked a pertinent question,
Just such a thrilling suggestion,
What is the state of me?
Well now, let’s see.

This is a good opening I wouldnt change anything, it flows perfectly
...
Forum: Literature & Lyrics 07-30-2005, 12:19 PM
Replies: 9
Views: 477
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Forum: Literature & Lyrics 07-29-2005, 05:19 PM
Replies: 9
Views: 477
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Forum: Literature & Lyrics 07-29-2005, 01:44 AM
Replies: 9
Views: 477
Posted By HorrorBusiness78
I understand and agree that it isnt the most...

I understand and agree that it isnt the most original piece but i still really like it, the chorus is probably my favorite part though.
Forum: Literature & Lyrics 07-28-2005, 06:30 PM
Replies: 9
Views: 477
Posted By HorrorBusiness78
its medium speed most of the time but it gets...

its medium speed most of the time but it gets faster sometimes. this is one of my bands only relationship style songs though and i like it a lot, probably just cause it has meaning to me...anyways...
Forum: Literature & Lyrics 07-28-2005, 06:12 PM
Replies: 6
Views: 302
Posted By HorrorBusiness78
well this is alright but you deffinately need to...

well this is alright but you deffinately need to work on it a lot more. These angry at your parents/etc. songs are kind of immature. It's saving grace is the way it is presented which is pretty...
Forum: Literature & Lyrics 07-28-2005, 03:20 PM
Replies: 9
Views: 477
Posted By HorrorBusiness78
SB (Crit 4 Crit)

I posted this a little while ago and didnt get any comments, probably because i didnt put (crit 4 crit) last time but it is so i'm reposting it. let me know what you think.


Second Best

There...
Forum: Literature & Lyrics 07-25-2005, 12:31 PM
Replies: 7
Views: 429
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Forum: Literature & Lyrics 07-25-2005, 01:52 AM
Replies: 7
Views: 429
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Forum: Literature & Lyrics 07-24-2005, 08:12 PM
Replies: 7
Views: 429
Posted By HorrorBusiness78
thanks for referring to me that way on a public...

thanks for referring to me that way on a public site thats great...lol thanks for the crit
Forum: Literature & Lyrics 07-24-2005, 05:46 PM
Replies: 7
Views: 429
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Forum: Literature & Lyrics 07-24-2005, 01:28 AM
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Views: 429
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Forum: Literature & Lyrics 07-23-2005, 08:27 PM
Replies: 7
Views: 429
Posted By HorrorBusiness78
Second Best

Second Best

There was a time
When I might have had a chance
But its gone far past its due
I waited as usual
Putting off what I thought would always be there
And now that she’s taken
I hate...
Forum: Literature & Lyrics 07-23-2005, 08:24 PM
Replies: 7
Views: 421
Posted By HorrorBusiness78
kind of boring, i guess not my style...6/10

kind of boring, i guess not my style...6/10
Forum: Literature & Lyrics 07-23-2005, 07:14 PM
Replies: 10
Views: 465
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Forum: Literature & Lyrics 07-22-2005, 06:56 PM
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Views: 465
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Forum: Literature & Lyrics 07-22-2005, 10:50 AM
Replies: 10
Views: 465
Posted By HorrorBusiness78
thanks everyone for the crits. this is an all...

thanks everyone for the crits. this is an all accoustic song im pretty sure so the recording should be done soon since it wont be too hard to do. i'll post it as soon as i can.
Forum: Literature & Lyrics 07-22-2005, 12:32 AM
Replies: 10
Views: 465
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Forum: Literature & Lyrics 07-21-2005, 08:49 PM
Replies: 10
Views: 465
Posted By HorrorBusiness78
Burned Roads (crit 4 crit)

Burned Roads

This starlit night, I have come to see
What we've heard
It's right ahead, the nuance of eternity
It's hanging over our choice

The dimmer days, Are now here
Greeting us in
What...
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