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Forum: Literature & Lyrics 11-17-2008, 09:17 AM
Replies: 5
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Posted By Distance
yes thank you finally someone for commenting. ...

yes thank you finally someone for commenting.
and thanks for the advice, honestly the only way i improve is when people say i suck. but I'll try to fix my lyrics.
Forum: Literature & Lyrics 11-10-2008, 09:09 AM
Replies: 5
Views: 432
Posted By Distance
dang this is good advice from everyone.

dang this is good advice from everyone.
Forum: Literature & Lyrics 11-03-2008, 09:17 AM
Replies: 5
Views: 432
Posted By Distance
Team Anti is the best team

Ya, you've got me all wrong
I've known about your secret for so long
This is the time, your fears come out tonight
don't close your eyes or
I'll nail your coffin tight

[human]
"Vampire, where...
Forum: Literature & Lyrics 10-28-2008, 12:16 PM
Replies: 9
Views: 669
Posted By Distance
I don't like so much repetition of "I". that's...

I don't like so much repetition of "I". that's one of my main problems though, but otherwise good lyrics.
Forum: Literature & Lyrics 10-28-2008, 12:11 PM
Replies: 4
Views: 523
Posted By Distance
It reminds me of Mewithoutyou. I don't know if...

It reminds me of Mewithoutyou. I don't know if you should keep the part about the *** it kind of takes away from it, it makes you only think about that line because it's funny
Forum: Literature & Lyrics 10-27-2008, 10:18 AM
Replies: 2
Views: 281
Posted By Distance
haha thanks, that's always been one of my...

haha thanks, that's always been one of my problems is using metaphors.
Forum: Literature & Lyrics 10-23-2008, 11:55 AM
Replies: 2
Views: 281
Posted By Distance
Story Time?

Why do you speak so much
What are you trying to prove
you are just a mouth
Shouting "listen" you shout "Listen"
A mouth with no ears
who wouldn't listen anyways
A mouth with no eyes
who...
Forum: Rock & Metal 10-23-2008, 11:42 AM
Replies: 18,958
Views: 647,350
Posted By Distance
ok thanks, i'm trying to find it, but I haven't...

ok thanks, i'm trying to find it, but I haven't yet.
Forum: Rock & Metal 10-20-2008, 10:09 AM
Replies: 18,958
Views: 647,350
Posted By Distance
dumb question for everyone, is there a thread...

dumb question for everyone, is there a thread about screaming/singing techniques here somewhere?
Forum: Literature & Lyrics 10-16-2008, 10:59 AM
Replies: 7,389
Views: 296,864
Posted By Distance
is there a thread about screaming anywhere on...

is there a thread about screaming anywhere on this site?
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