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Forum: Literature & Lyrics 12-01-2004, 09:56 AM
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Posted By Bexi
TY gracious ppl

TY gracious ppl
Forum: Literature & Lyrics 11-30-2004, 05:58 PM
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Views: 331
Posted By Bexi
please ...?

please ...?
Forum: Literature & Lyrics 11-28-2004, 07:59 PM
Replies: 32
Views: 936
Posted By Bexi
OOH Thankya

OOH
Thankya
Forum: Literature & Lyrics 11-28-2004, 07:56 PM
Replies: 13
Views: 244
Posted By Bexi
Cool i will try pop by to see it. same here, I...

Cool i will try pop by to see it. same here, I just posted but its pretty weak...need to redo alot..just tryna beat the block hehe
Forum: Literature & Lyrics 11-28-2004, 05:53 PM
Replies: 7
Views: 331
Posted By Bexi
Unbreakable/Stainless

Why canít you see that my bitterness is driven,
By your perceptions of my stainless thoughts?
In all the darkest corners I kept myself hidden,
Choking on the masks that time has bought.

I raced...
Forum: Literature & Lyrics 11-28-2004, 05:49 PM
Replies: 14
Views: 336
Posted By Bexi
The approach was certainly somethign new. It...

The approach was certainly somethign new. It seems a little like back to basics to escape society, but in a much more slam do it way, which was different-cool!

the in sahpe line seemed a little...
Forum: Literature & Lyrics 11-28-2004, 05:43 PM
Replies: 32
Views: 936
Posted By Bexi
Read...I hope my crits at leats attempt what you...

Read...I hope my crits at leats attempt what you outlined
Forum: Literature & Lyrics 11-28-2004, 05:39 PM
Replies: 19
Poll: newby writer
Views: 326
Posted By Bexi
Aside from teh repitition, it cert is one of the...

Aside from teh repitition, it cert is one of the better newb posts i ahve read here. The sweet sour thing i liked, plus the way you used the drinkign , eating and breathign someone..I think it was...
Forum: Literature & Lyrics 11-28-2004, 05:36 PM
Replies: 13
Views: 244
Posted By Bexi
"My Shadow Walks in Paranoia" ...

"My Shadow Walks in Paranoia"

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Lights out in Iowa
The nightís as warm as what has filled my eyes--Maybe i am...
Forum: Literature & Lyrics 11-22-2004, 05:42 PM
Replies: 7
Views: 315
Posted By Bexi
Near intangible He is the one drop Long...

Near intangible
He is the one drop
Long sighed-for
But which falls and fades
Far faster than I can
Close my eyes--he seems to be small but not insignifiacnt..i sort of liek that because it...
Forum: Literature & Lyrics 11-16-2004, 06:50 PM
Replies: 29
Views: 730
Posted By Bexi
yeah i will agree and say it isn't as good as...

yeah i will agree and say it isn't as good as some of your other stuff

however,

Lesson two: grab your love
Grasp her and hold her tight--bit too much of a basic intro
Called a missed wish, so...
Forum: Literature & Lyrics 11-14-2004, 05:27 PM
Replies: 17
Views: 304
Posted By Bexi
oh no..this site has rep too ?

oh no..this site has rep too ?
Forum: Literature & Lyrics 11-14-2004, 05:23 PM
Replies: 11
Views: 411
Posted By Bexi
aw i dint see it pre change.... anyways here...

aw i dint see it pre change....

anyways here we go

Trusting that a new decision
Will start my own demise--loved this because i think it freames the uncertainty we..or maybe not everyone..but...
Forum: Literature & Lyrics 11-03-2004, 09:54 AM
Replies: 3
Views: 253
Posted By Bexi
It's quite fluid, and the strcuture sems to acrry...

It's quite fluid, and the strcuture sems to acrry itself no problem..it si abit repetitive but there again maybe the style, the anger feedign through warrants that i guess.
Forum: Literature & Lyrics 11-03-2004, 09:52 AM
Replies: 13
Views: 287
Posted By Bexi
Hm yeah The whole war metaphor is strong...

Hm yeah The whole war metaphor is strong throughout, you seem to use lots of the right images to get it accross. The sharpnel cascading legs was a very impressive line.
Forum: Literature & Lyrics 10-31-2004, 07:24 PM
Replies: 8
Views: 392
Posted By Bexi
Constructive...hmmm.....

Constructive...hmmm.....
Forum: Literature & Lyrics 10-28-2004, 01:55 PM
Replies: 8
Views: 392
Posted By Bexi
pretty words that don't make sense...sounds about...

pretty words that don't make sense...sounds about right :)
Forum: Literature & Lyrics 10-28-2004, 01:03 PM
Replies: 8
Views: 392
Posted By Bexi
...uhm that doesn't rhyme.... but anyways...

...uhm that doesn't rhyme....

but anyways thanks for reading and commenting
Forum: Literature & Lyrics 10-28-2004, 11:07 AM
Replies: 5
Views: 274
Posted By Bexi
i have to agree..its rare i edit or add..i either...

i have to agree..its rare i edit or add..i either can write it ina line or i forget it
Forum: Literature & Lyrics 10-28-2004, 11:05 AM
Replies: 8
Views: 392
Posted By Bexi
Low Visibility

Here you have another one...do what you will..or won't with it

Shredded emptiness cushions the void,
The hollow sickly feeling,
Swallows you up until you blink destroyed,
The vapour rushes to...
Forum: Literature & Lyrics 10-24-2004, 07:31 PM
Replies: 10
Views: 439
Posted By Bexi
___|Chaplain Revision, revitalization ...

___|Chaplain

Revision, revitalization
Extracting the nutrients in the glass--somehow i see this image real clearly..almost like a school science lab ..don't know why :s
Following them down...
Forum: Literature & Lyrics 10-24-2004, 07:20 PM
Replies: 3,406
Views: 67,864
Posted By Bexi
if it was easy to hate you, I'd be treading...

if it was easy to hate you,
I'd be treading this path in safety,
But it's so far from home now,
My mind mosaic can't bathe me.

Control
Demise
reveal
Denial
Forum: Literature & Lyrics 10-24-2004, 07:13 PM
Replies: 15
Views: 542
Posted By Bexi
I can't write punk...

I can't write punk...
Forum: Literature & Lyrics 10-24-2004, 06:20 PM
Replies: 6
Views: 335
Posted By Bexi
I do think it's abit much for me in parts...like...

I do think it's abit much for me in parts...like i feel really small against thise big words images and so on. You have such a style aboutyour stuff..like an absolute random genius crossed with...
Forum: Literature & Lyrics 10-24-2004, 06:15 PM
Replies: 8
Views: 382
Posted By Bexi
...Okay as usual it's freakin awesome....gimme...

...Okay as usual it's freakin awesome....gimme some of your lines man.,gimem em..now

I re affirm that DD is my favourite lyricist on this forum
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