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Forum: Literature & Lyrics 05-07-2012, 07:23 PM
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Posted By novanebula361
Very poetic-sounding but vague. The sentence...

Very poetic-sounding but vague. The sentence structure muddles the message even more, though that may have been your intention.

My best guess of the meaning is how someone idolized cannot live up...
Forum: Literature & Lyrics 05-07-2012, 04:53 AM
Replies: 19
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Posted By novanebula361
NEEDTOPOST: This was less me writing lyrics for...

NEEDTOPOST: This was less me writing lyrics for the first time (I have written them before) and more writing this sort of lyric for the first time.

SCS: Yeah, expecting too much of the listener /...
Forum: Literature & Lyrics 05-06-2012, 09:07 PM
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Posted By novanebula361
You could consider this an experiment, I suppose:...

You could consider this an experiment, I suppose: I'm more used to writing stories than lyrics, so I wanted to see if I could combine the two. Apparently I need some work.

I'll keep the feedback...
Forum: Literature & Lyrics 05-06-2012, 12:26 PM
Replies: 19
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Posted By novanebula361
songwriting =/= my future job Any particular...

songwriting =/= my future job

Any particular reason why it sucks?
Forum: Literature & Lyrics 05-06-2012, 11:54 AM
Replies: 19
Views: 2,536
Posted By novanebula361
Chandelier

“Chandelier”

I’d reached for the ceiling but never quite touched it,
so my feet said farewell to the floor;
I hung in midair for a moment—
before my fingers found glassy purchase.
So there I...
Forum: Literature & Lyrics 05-05-2012, 02:36 PM
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Posted By novanebula361
I can't say these lyrics are good or bad,...

I can't say these lyrics are good or bad, honestly. The concept is good, but the execution is a little awry. It's well and good to state your message straight-out, but I feel the simile "...the...
Forum: Literature & Lyrics 05-04-2012, 08:19 PM
Replies: 4
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Posted By novanebula361
The refrain of "And you don't have to like it /...

The refrain of "And you don't have to like it / But you don't have to know" is powerful. However, the actual verses sound too straightforward to me; try giving examples of how you feel when you lie,...
Forum: Literature & Lyrics 05-04-2012, 07:40 PM
Replies: 7
Views: 3,258
Posted By novanebula361
The lyrics are very nice. I like how they're...

The lyrics are very nice. I like how they're short yet they describe all that's needed to form a scene. "Conversation Piece" stands out to me because its succinctness and the triviality of its...
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