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Forum: Literature & Lyrics 09-14-2009, 04:10 PM
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Posted By Hastetheday09
thank you alain I appreciate the response. when i...

thank you alain I appreciate the response. when i wrote it i kinda thought of it as a slow song that builds up to a heavier ending but it definitely could work out as a pop rock song. Judging if I...
Forum: Literature & Lyrics 09-11-2009, 01:44 PM
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Posted By Hastetheday09
Ok I'm sorry about not putting the line breaks, I...

Ok I'm sorry about not putting the line breaks, I just put it up for the sake of putting it up. But i understand that it looks a lot better and easier to read. critiques are welcome whenever your...
Forum: Literature & Lyrics 09-10-2009, 12:59 PM
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Posted By Hastetheday09
it would definitely be a hard rock song. it would...

it would definitely be a hard rock song. it would end up starting kinda slow and picking up for the chorus and 3rd verse or so, and end up being heavy and have screaming during the 2nd half.
at...
Forum: Literature & Lyrics 07-11-2009, 01:43 AM
Replies: 1
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Posted By Hastetheday09
This is actually quite good. There's a lot of...

This is actually quite good. There's a lot of rhyming but it definitely works with this. I tried rhyming a lot in one lyric of mine and that lyric failed haha. But yeah this is very nice, and to me...
Forum: Literature & Lyrics 07-11-2009, 01:37 AM
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Posted By Hastetheday09
This is the most recent lyric I have at least...

This is the most recent lyric I have at least that I found on the myspace of the band i wanted to start lol. i'm sure I have newer ones in my lyric book in the basement, just havent gotten around to...
Forum: Literature & Lyrics 07-11-2009, 01:35 AM
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Posted By Hastetheday09
What We Know

Too many days, contained by walls of contempt.
Not long enough, to get away from you.

Selfless abomination. Let the mind wander off the track. Release, relapse. Stop the clocks and regain...
Forum: Literature & Lyrics 07-11-2009, 01:17 AM
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Posted By Hastetheday09
As i stated earlier I would love critiques lol i...

As i stated earlier I would love critiques lol i just want to know what all of you who read this thinks. ever since i wrote this i've changed my lryical content a lot kinda being random with some...
Forum: Literature & Lyrics 07-11-2009, 01:02 AM
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Posted By Hastetheday09
This Is What You Wanted

This is a song I wrote close to 8 months ago back when I thought I would be in a band at the time. This is one of many I have written. Critiques are definitely welcome because I still want to be in a...
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