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Forum: Literature & Lyrics 05-24-2013, 08:58 AM
Replies: 10
Views: 425
Posted By Captain North
I didn't mean an on-purpose-parody. Comedy...

I didn't mean an on-purpose-parody. Comedy demands an audience and he seems fine with not having one.
Forum: Literature & Lyrics 05-24-2013, 02:24 AM
Replies: 10
Views: 425
Posted By Captain North
I can't tell if he's being sarcastic (which I...

I can't tell if he's being sarcastic (which I doubt) or he's just a living parody (which he probably is)
Forum: Literature & Lyrics 05-23-2013, 03:12 AM
Replies: 10
Views: 425
Posted By Captain North
It was more at him than you. I get the poem is...

It was more at him than you. I get the poem is just for shits n giggles
Forum: Literature & Lyrics 05-22-2013, 07:29 AM
Replies: 10
Views: 425
Posted By Captain North
Mentioning Shakespeare and sonnets doesn't mean...

Mentioning Shakespeare and sonnets doesn't mean this has anything to do with him, or he'll, that he had any influence outside of those two words.
Forum: Literature & Lyrics 05-14-2013, 11:06 AM
Replies: 11
Views: 435
Posted By Captain North
I wasn't antagonistic until he said that. But...

I wasn't antagonistic until he said that. But yeah, I suppose it belongs to a space and time. Just like a two year old scribbling on a wall belongs to a space and time. That doesn't make it good. I'm...
Forum: Literature & Lyrics 05-14-2013, 01:35 AM
Replies: 11
Views: 435
Posted By Captain North
Because he's a grown man writing shitty poetry...

Because he's a grown man writing shitty poetry and has made literally zero effort to improve over the time he's been posting here. And come on, how is "I don't need to get it, I just need to write...
Forum: Literature & Lyrics 05-13-2013, 10:25 AM
Replies: 11
Views: 435
Posted By Captain North
Um, ok then mate. I seriously don't get why you...

Um, ok then mate. I seriously don't get why you post here
Forum: Literature & Lyrics 05-11-2013, 07:05 AM
Replies: 11
Views: 435
Posted By Captain North
You talk about cussing, but you're afraid to...

You talk about cussing, but you're afraid to actually swear. I dunno, this seems like a song written about an angry man by someone who doesn't get it
Forum: Literature & Lyrics 04-26-2013, 06:49 PM
Replies: 16
Views: 1,724
Posted By Captain North
Yeah fair enough. There's also the fact...

Yeah fair enough.

There's also the fact (admittedly you couldn't have known this) that this is part of a greater whole. A concept album of sorts, and this is right near the end where Im admitting...
Forum: Literature & Lyrics 04-26-2013, 02:06 AM
Replies: 16
Views: 1,724
Posted By Captain North
Yeah we have very different ideas on lyrics. I...

Yeah we have very different ideas on lyrics. I mean, I can like good music without good lyrics, but as a writer I don't want anything I do to be filler.

And my issues with the way you edited my...
Forum: Literature & Lyrics 04-24-2013, 05:24 AM
Replies: 16
Views: 1,724
Posted By Captain North
Aside from the fact that the first bit doesn't...

Aside from the fact that the first bit doesn't even make sense, you haven't made this feel good at all. Now it's just a muddled message, and you removed a bunch of my best (and most from the gut)...
Forum: Literature & Lyrics 04-16-2013, 08:06 AM
Replies: 16
Views: 1,724
Posted By Captain North
Something funny I'd say in real life...? I...

Something funny I'd say in real life...?

I get the criticism for the fourth and fifth stanzas, but the third is probably my favourite part (as is pretty darn personalized) while I didn't think the...
Forum: Literature & Lyrics 04-05-2013, 07:45 PM
Replies: 12
Views: 571
Posted By Captain North
I'm saying they're definitely the sort of thing I...

I'm saying they're definitely the sort of thing I wrote at 14, yes. If you like them, you like them, whatever. Just pointing out I can maybe help
Forum: Literature & Lyrics 04-05-2013, 08:49 AM
Replies: 12
Views: 571
Posted By Captain North
Some of the stuff I wrote when I was 14 might be...

Some of the stuff I wrote when I was 14 might be up your alley then
Forum: Literature & Lyrics 04-05-2013, 04:08 AM
Replies: 12
Views: 571
Posted By Captain North
post some examples of what you're looking for....

post some examples of what you're looking for. have a look through some of the stuff I've posted before to see if you like my style. none of them are up for your use, but if you like my writing im...
Forum: Literature & Lyrics 03-31-2013, 11:01 PM
Replies: 12
Views: 571
Posted By Captain North
What kind of band?

What kind of band?
Forum: Literature & Lyrics 02-06-2013, 12:33 AM
Replies: 11
Views: 482
Posted By Captain North
Well, how old are you now? Cos if you're 18 and...

Well, how old are you now? Cos if you're 18 and judging your worth based on 15 then lol
Forum: Literature & Lyrics 02-03-2013, 02:06 AM
Replies: 9
Views: 926
Posted By Captain North
Kinda reads like converge lyrics

Kinda reads like converge lyrics
Forum: Literature & Lyrics 01-30-2013, 06:19 PM
Replies: 7
Views: 473
Posted By Captain North
1 is okay. 2 doesn't even make sense. 3 is...

1 is okay. 2 doesn't even make sense. 3 is painful. However when used together in that short poem they work much better
Forum: Literature & Lyrics 01-29-2013, 12:01 AM
Replies: 17
Views: 1,146
Posted By Captain North
Dude, he's telling you the truth.

Dude, he's telling you the truth.
Forum: Literature & Lyrics 01-23-2013, 05:22 PM
Replies: 17
Views: 1,146
Posted By Captain North
My bad daily, I'm used to the people who simply...

My bad daily, I'm used to the people who simply say something like "no good" to be dicks. I mean, even if you do think that it's still a dickish thing to say when it's not something downright awful...
Forum: Literature & Lyrics 01-22-2013, 06:25 PM
Replies: 17
Views: 1,146
Posted By Captain North
Dude, ignore him. There's always a few trolls in...

Dude, ignore him. There's always a few trolls in this section.
Forum: Literature & Lyrics 01-22-2013, 06:24 PM
Replies: 16
Views: 1,724
Posted By Captain North
Thanks man! Really appreciated. But yeah, not...

Thanks man! Really appreciated. But yeah, not sure how it's at all unnecessary. (plus I swear like a sailor normally so it makes sense that I'd refuse to shy away from it)
Forum: Literature & Lyrics 01-16-2013, 05:50 PM
Replies: 17
Views: 1,146
Posted By Captain North
Not too shabby, although I'm not entirely certain...

Not too shabby, although I'm not entirely certain of how political it is aside from a vague sense of "you guys are fucking it up" or something. Also, the last line feels kinda out of place
Forum: Literature & Lyrics 01-14-2013, 06:08 PM
Replies: 13
Views: 3,061
Posted By Captain North
Thanks. And yeah, because dying from an aneurysm...

Thanks. And yeah, because dying from an aneurysm in your sleep is one of the most peaceful, painless ways to go.
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