Challenge 96 - Replies
 

No rhyming "treason" with "reason".

Thanks.

[QUOTE=SubtleDagger]No rhyming "treason" with "reason".

Thanks.[/QUOTE]

Kasabian did it and got a UK hit:-/

[QUOTE=EmergencyRoom]Kasabian did it and got a UK hit:-/[/QUOTE]
Hits suck.

[QUOTE=SubtleDagger]Hits suck.[/QUOTE]

Hence the :-/

Oh, also the UK sucks.

Now we're talking.

I promise to do less badly this time.

[QUOTE=SubtleDagger]Oh, also the UK sucks.[/QUOTE]

Care to elaborate?

[QUOTE=EmergencyRoom]Care to elaborate?[/QUOTE]
Not really. It just kind of sucks.

[QUOTE=SubtleDagger]Not really. It just kind of sucks.[/QUOTE]

Like a hoover or a cheap 40 year-old prostitute?

[QUOTE=Broken String (in the entries thread)]I'll give a shot...

but I am a newb here, so when/where do I enter my song?[/QUOTE]
Whenever you want within the next week, in the entries thread.

Thank you :thumb:

No problem, just be sure to use the word and keep regular conversing in here.

Gotcha...

I like your avatar :D

He's the queen of France.

What is the url for that full thing? I figure I ould google family life network + Queen of France but then I might end up with gay **** so I'm not willing to risk it.

[QUOTE=Dancin' Man]He's the queen of France.

What is the url for that full thing? I figure I ould google family life network + Queen of France but then I might end up with gay **** so I'm not willing to risk it.[/QUOTE]

I haven't been able to find a link to get the full movie of Rejected yet.

[QUOTE=DFelon204409]Dude, you're like 14. Only label you have is the one your mommy put on your sweatshirts in case you lose them while riding the big yellow bus.[/QUOTE]

Hey, your show needs more HXC.

C00l w3rd.

R3411y?

[QUOTE=DFelon204409]Hey, I had guests and I let them pick out crap by the Dandy Warhols and Willie Nelson. Chill about it.[/QUOTE]

ah, so they had vaginas.

dfelon gotz sum... loaloll

Seeing Ed Gein in 15 days. Yeeha.

You guys are lame.

What's horribly lame is that Pelican have dropped out of the Opeth tour and now I'm stuck having to watch an unknown local band called the S.T.R.E.E.T.S.

Pelican's good, Opeth blows. I don't blame them.

[QUOTE=sd]No rhyming "treason" with "reason".

Thanks.[/QUOTE]

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[QUOTE=newb]I know you all hate these 15 minute attemps, but here goes

Give me a disease and a [B]reason[/B]
And I'll inject without first thinking
Cataclysmic seizures slowly sinking
You can't complete what's already deceased

My options end at [B]treason[/B]
Can't betray, when you hold no loyalty
Hung up and bleed like spoiled meat
You can't entomb what's already exhumed

New life for the recently deceased
New breath for the dead and buried[/QUOTE]

i just LOVE mx.

So I wrote about prostitutes.

yeah.

[QUOTE=TojesDoLan]So I wrote about prostitutes.

yeah.[/QUOTE]

The next step is prosthetic limbs.

[QUOTE=ATC]The next step is prosthetic limbs.[/QUOTE]
I don't know, I've been voted the worst in the two LC's I've entered.

Maybe that's a pointer for me to just quit.

[QUOTE=TojesDoLan]I don't know, I've been voted the worst in the two LC's I've entered.

Maybe that's a pointer for me to just quit.[/QUOTE]

Pfft, long as you show a decent learning curve, it's all good. Third time's the charm, after all. I'll read your earlier works in an about an hour and see what you need to change, right after dinner. I'm a hungry hungry person right now.

[url]http://www.musicianforums.com/forums/showthread.php?t=400426[/url]

You can check my latest "official" poem/song.

It's very basic, but I like it.

Nothing wrong with simplicity in anything. Simple by itself does not mean bad.

I've critted it. Hope it helps.