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Hi there People we are DorEterna and we just done our first Demo and here is a couple of track's that we like to hear what you think.........

If you like Dimmu Borgir/The Kovenant /Children oF Bodom this is something you must.......

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Let us know what you think.

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THANK'S A LOT FOR YOUR COMENT'S ON THE TRACK'S:confused:

Sounded really good to me, I dont listen to too much Death Metal but it does sound good.

**** that rocked man GJ!

lol that was great reminded me of cryptopsy a little bit but im a death metal fan and i loved it only one down fall......ned to make the vocalist sing over hte instruments a little but yall are shredding and bashing over his vocals lol his vocals are good just need to be louder.

Man thats some wiked $het.
The leads could have been louder during the solo, and it seemed to have too much high end, was static sounding.
How did u record this, in a studio?

[QUOTE][i]Originally posted by demon knight [/i]
[B]lol that was great reminded me of cryptopsy a little bit but im a death metal fan and i loved it only one down fall......ned to make the vocalist sing over hte instruments a little but yall are shredding and bashing over his vocals lol his vocals are good just need to be louder. [/B][/QUOTE]

The style of vocals are more like Carcass, but yea Cryotopsy......i guess is a bit like them.......well spoted.:eek:

Yea we agreed with you on the vocals, we wanted them to be louder but our budget was gone by the time we were to re-mix them, but thanks alot for your comment.:)




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[QUOTE][i]Originally posted by M0T0BREATH [/i]
[B]Man thats some wiked $het.
The leads could have been louder during the solo, and it seemed to have too much high end, was static sounding.
How did u record this, in a studio? [/B][/QUOTE]

Thank's

Well this recoding was done by Pete Brown (Anathema PinK Floyd Defecation) on a studio and we did three track on day and a half.

Leads were a bit ok to us but i guess we can sort that out now as we have our on Pro-tools (hardware & software). We keep that in mind. Thank's for your comment's.





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[QUOTE][i]Originally posted by Held In Scorn [/i]
[B]**** that rocked man GJ! [/B][/QUOTE]


Thanks..................:thumb:





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lol it qs good but it sounded more liek cradle of filth to me but overall itas good and yes u need to make your vocalist more powerfull teh it will be perfect

[QUOTE][i]Originally posted by Phantasma [/i]
[B]lol it qs good but it sounded more liek cradle of filth to me but overall itas good and yes u need to make your vocalist more powerfull teh it will be perfect [/B][/QUOTE]


Cradle Of Filth..............:rolleyes: well maybe on When Angels Fall
but what about Titanium Solus? To me is like Fear Factory with a touch of Kovenant...:D




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Come on guys i want more comments about the two track's.

Maybe i started to be a pain in the ***, sorry if i'am but i need to know if you people like them or not, so far i hade some replays but i want more MORE MORE muaaaaaaaa i'm Evil:D







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That some good ****

Any more comments?

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More comments? How about you are an a$$?

[QUOTE][i]Originally posted by GimmeSlack12 [/i]
[B]More comments? How about you are an a$$? [/B][/QUOTE]


[B][COLOR=DarkRed]HOW ABOUT YOUR ARE A CUNT........:angry: I DONT NEED PEOPLE LIKE YOU TO POST ANYTHING HERE, COZ TO TELL YOU THE TRUE I HAD ENOUGHT OF YOU ALREADY....SO GO AND FUK YUR SELF UP THE FUKING A*SS OR EVEN BETTER SUCK SOME DONKY COCK....:lol:[/COLOR][/B]



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I was very dissapointed because i thought "black metal" meant you were a bunch of black guys playing heavy metal (that would be really new and interesting to hear.) i only listened to one song and i wont say anything cuz i hate metal. the production was really good though. good job on that.

hmm...

I was very interrested in hearing, cause me and my band play some prograssive thrash or something like that

First of all, the recording isn't mixed very well. You guys need to work a lot on the sounding. No basses, the low-mid eq is totally cut off the track, which cuts the drive in the whole music. The guitars are messed up between eachother. All because of the sounding, so be very carefull. Just practicing the songs isn't going to get you to a good quality. After you lay down the tracks, the hardest job comes. Making the sound. And you have to work there.

Second. I don't understand why do you call it progressive. By definition progressive means, something new, experimental never done before. These two tracks at least, sound to me very much like other black/death bands...won't say names here...

What I liked tho in the both of the tracks is the composition. That is an excellent work so no comments there. But I would like to have comments on the playing. You guys also need to practice some, you are not always in the same tempo. Also does it just sound to me or on the recording (When angels fall) the crash and ride is recorded in reverse, or was the microphone tweaked out to maximum on those parts ?

I would say that titanium souls is a very good song.

Anywayz, overall it's a good job, with the above mentioned comments...but then again who am I to judge.

p.s. for those who missed me on this forum...I'M BACK :)

Listened to When Angles Fall, not to bad. Pretty good song. I also here the weird cymbal thing. Kind of annoying.

I was just goin back looking for old music on the forums and it sounds great, keep up the good work

[QUOTE=SRTracer]I was just goin back looking for old music on the forums and it sounds great, keep up the good work[/QUOTE]

Well thanks a lot for all the comments done in this forum, we will keep the good work, and the new mixing of the two traks plus anothe one is almost done so keep looking here or on our site that is also closed for the moment but will be on soon .

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Thankx to all ...

NEW UPDATE:

Anothere tack "In Searing Waves Of Dementia"



Hi there People we are DorEterna and we just done our first Demo and here is a couple of track's that we like to hear what you think.........

If you like Dimmu Borgir/The Kovenant /Children oF Bodom this is something you must.......

[URL=http://www.soundclick.com/bands/3/doreterna.htm]HELL IS HERE[/URL]

Let us know what you think.




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That Rocked!!!

Honestly, that was pretty good stuff.
Compliments
-Wasn't very repetitive
-Good Vocals
-Good Guitar Work

Not-So compliments
-That woman's voice in the background during a few of the verses of one of the songs
-I don't like the drum sound, either turn them down or give them a different sound
-Though the vocals were good, it sounded like I was hearing the same thing over and over again.

[QUOTE=Per Ardua Ad Astra]Honestly, that was pretty good stuff.
Compliments
-Wasn't very repetitive
-Good Vocals
-Good Guitar Work

Not-So compliments
-That woman's voice in the background during a few of the verses of one of the songs
-I don't like the drum sound, either turn them down or give them a different sound
-Though the vocals were good, it sounded like I was hearing the same thing over and over again.[/QUOTE]

First I want to say thanks for your comments.

Second: About all the non-compliments, we can take it, we do realy feel that there is alot to be done on the tracks , like Drumming.....alot of people comments the same.....but is a bit difficult to change them as all the track were recorded on Pro-tools and the tracks roots are on a DV-format so either we pay or we may is well get our on set-up (maybe).we do have one at the moment but is not the whole thing "if you know what i meand"

Vocals: we are happy with them, its realy difficult to get a good singer now a day's and all the hard work is done by Akatechon our lead guitar, it does sound like Carcass, so fits the style......but some more work could be done no doubt.


Hail.........






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If you stop to have a look why dont you live a reply................ :thumb:

C'mon people let me know what you think :naughty:






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if i liked death metal id say it was pretty good
**** i hate that music

That was really great. I like the black/death metal sound without the obscene amount of "tr00"ness. Drums were heavy and the guitars had a really cool and heavy tone. Vocals were a good mix of Bodom and Black Metal style.

I also think that alot of the people here were to bit[COLOR=White]c[/COLOR]hy. This stuff is great, and props to you for writing this stuff.

Im not really into death metal but I though it was pretty solid.. nice guitar and drum work.. vocals were ok...

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