Paul Ferland
acoustic/acoustic rock
http://musicallydeclined.blogspot.com
click my user name to the left and click homepage then click my songs.
most of my songs are there. two songs to consider are the top two.
"Stroganoff" (instrumental) and They've got something to tell me"
you have to click on the "My songs" icon

They've got something to tell me: by Paul Ferland

Guitar intro

What if I nullify this one
it looks all twisted and bent
What if I blend it with that one
you think they'll get what I meant

I'm going off on a journey
I'm getting off on the scent
always works better in theory
our sense of spirit is spent

chorus


Did I mention I'm dreaming
yes, I'm lucid and free
I'm in control and I'm flying
letting go is the key


There's people silent and staring
I think they've been here awhile
they've got something to tell me
it's in the look with no smile

in a past that is daunting
lies a message within
in a house and it's hauntings
let the healing begin

guitar and piano break

chorus

it feels so right and I'm drifting
there's someone following me
we're syncronized and we're going
through a strange mystery

I feel departure I'm waking
I guess it comes down to fate
if they've got something to tell me
I guess it'll just have to wait

Chorus
Thanks!

i currently have no lyrics to my songs but if you could give them a listen at www.myspace.com/jonahhex1838 and give them a quick once over it would be mightily appreciated! :)

http://www.myspace.com/vegangrannies

Straight Edge DIY Vegan Hardcore

Rebecca Druce
Pop-rock/folk
www.myspace.com/rebeccadmusic
www.youtube.com/rebeccadmusic

I am 18, been writing songs and performing as a solo artist for a couple of years. I just recorded a new EP which included some other musicians on electric guitar, bass and drums to liven it up a bit (I hope). Currently looking for more acoustic gigs with my boyfriend who is lead guitarist.

I think the lyrics are quite obvious in the songs but if you want me to type them out then just ask. I'd love to know what everyone thinks. If you like it, please add me or subscribe to the youtube channel.

Hi our band is Metalic Leaf
 

our band is at www.jamwave.com/artist.aspx?AID=5342

sorry could not make the hyperlink.

so yeah ive been gettin into the forums lately

here goes nothing

Band Name: The Lost Of Desires
Genre:Death Metal
Myspace: None yet lol

this my lyrics wich i need desperate help with

i'll nail my eyelids
to the back of my skull
spend my life in watch
waiting for your return

ill keep these truth
inside my tortured mind
and maintain those standards
passed down your poisoned sigh

i'll rip my chest open
and know its all empty there
staple myself to the ceiling
and pray for thy repent

i'll stare straight to heaven
and know its just as empty as hell
i'll bleed my knees begging
to know prayers wont be heard

on the grand book of Death
my name tops all of man
and in the place of eternal rest
my body will burn from its ashes to no end

You Gave me life
but you dont know a single thing
about surviving
being cast aside of everything
you gave me life
but you dont know a single thing
bout life itself

i got nothing to give!
fallen out of grace eaons ago
nothing at all is left
dust is all that remains

Take what you want of me
Horror awaits for those not deem
a hex shall be cast upon your kind
no shadow will be safe again

We're in the process of recording our EP, we're called Down A Lifetime,
we'e pop punk with a post hardcore feel,
I wrote these lyrics in the studio:

Hollywood, I've lost count of the risks I take for you,
You were a ghost town, you were a scene.
Just another scene.
Starstruck in these city lights,
and I've lost count of the second chances.
Look behind the curtain,
you'll see how much you've missed.
A plastic face and ocean eyes could never cover up
the way you hve this city wrapped around your finger.
Hollywood, you burn so bright,
I'm lost inside these city lights.

I'll post a link when we're done recording, but I wanted feedback on these lyrics because idk if theyll be final.

dont give up the day job

that's getting a little tiresome now

i meant it that time

New duo: Starar
 

[B]Starar[/B]
Pop/Urban/Soul
http://www.myspace.com/stararband
Starar are a sibling duo and we have a new album coming out, 'Who'. Our music is urban/pop/rock/soul with songs similar to Lady Gaga, Alicia Keys, Pixie Lott etc. I play guitar, keyboards and sing, and Steven is the drummer and bassist. We both write the songs and perform everything.

Give our music a listen and let me know hat you think. Our album is available for pre-order through Amazon aswell.

[b]Father[/b]
Depressive/atmospheric black metal

Me and my one friend just u no grimdarkin it up. Lyrics are introspective I guess idk.

[url]http://www.mediafire.com/?thndznwhwyt[/url]

Band name-Dylan Panek
Genre-PSYCHEDELIC/PROG ROCK
www.myspace.com/psytrious
www.youtube.com/boobooi
I am an independent artist who writes and records all the music myself.I also play all the instruments for my songs.They are pink floyd/jimi hendrix sounding.
Lyrics-None

here's my entry
"...We're Going" by 'Spassm', my band
mind giving critique?
i may redux the vocals, fyi
http://spassm.bandcamp.com/track/were-going

[QUOTE=boobooi;17977804]Band name-Dylan Panek
Genre-PSYCHEDELIC/PROG ROCK
www.myspace.com/psytrious
www.youtube.com/boobooi
I am an independent artist who writes and records all the music myself.I also play all the instruments for my songs.They are pink floyd/jimi hendrix sounding.
Lyrics-None[/QUOTE]

pretty nice, produced professionally.
pretty trippy, actually.
damn nice.
also, you really shouldn't charge people for this stuff, take the NIN way =D
on a side note, how did you get this up on itunes? i was reading about it on some tuts, but couldn't figure it out

Havent been on this forum in years but heres some new **** i wanted to show off. My friends and I casually recorded these three songs over our winter break (on acid for a good part of the time lol)

theyre all decent but i like the 2nd two better, the first needs a rerecording and ****

http://myspace.com/ilovespacegoat

appreciate any comments a lot <3

Meninx- UK Artist
 

Hi Guys,

Just signed up. Info provided below:

Band name : Meninx
Genre : Hip-Hop/Rap/Spoken Word/Alternative
myspace: www.myspace.com/meninxmusic
Small description: emotions/outlooks/opinions/regrets...

Meninx

fed up with mainstream music on the radio?
 

This a song i wrote about the crap we hear on the radio sometimes.
I'd love to have your opinion:
Visit this link:

http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=CY2UbPXxsYY

My samples
 

Obie - Liverpool UK

jusat signed up, so thought id show a few of my oldest tracks
i now do vocals to electro/funky/scouse house in the dance genre

these 2 are from back in the day along with a remix of one

http://www.myspace.com/scousemadness

Precipice
Heavy Metal/Hardcore
http://www.reverbnation.com/precipice
We self released a demo and due to not having a whole lot of money we didn't have access to high quality recording equipment. However we did get interest from a few small record labels from it and we'll be signing a contract in January. With that said I was wondering if we could get a critique on our demo's musical and lyrical aspects (as well as any other lyrics on our blog you happen to want to critique), so that we can have an even better album release when the time comes.
Lyrics- http://precipicemetal.blogspot.com

We need a mod again.

New Music,
 

Hi there,
where's the best place to post new music??

http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=r4Q7Rpd4ias

Band name: Voodoo Steve
Genre: Hard Rock, Alternative
http://www.facebook.com/pages/Voodoo-Steve-Band-Page/
We're trying to bring back guitar-driven rock to the mainstream.
Lyrics:

Take All I Can Get

The scene for chicks ain't so hot today
But I think I got an excuse
They can't believe that I am cool
It is all just a clever ruse

So I'm on the market and I'm
Desperate for someone to come
Even if it's bad or just sex
I'm just waiting to have some fun

I'll take all I can get
Even if it's bad
I'll take all I can get
Even if it drives me mad

Let me hook up once or twice
Then you can see I'm mighty nice
For now you and me never met
I'll take all I can get

The scene for love ain't so hot today
I'm afraid that I'll have to go
I don't care if you cheat on me
Just baby never let me know

I'm housebroken and come in style
And if you hurt me it's okay
I'll never have enough of pain
I'm never gonna make you pay

I'll take all I can get
Even if it's bad
I'll take all I can get
Even if it drives me mad

Let me hook up once or twice
Then you can see I'm mighty nice
For now you and me never met
I'll take all I can get

And in that small window of time
I'll be yours and you'll be mine
We can share our lives together
And if you dump me then it's fine

(solo)

I'll take all I can get
Even if it's bad
I'll take all I can get
Even if it drives me mad

I'll take all I can get
Even if she is a slut
I'll take all I can get
I hate being in this rut

I'll take all I can get
Even if she's in an episode
I'll take all I can get
I'm so ready to bear the load

Let me hook up once or twice
Then you can see I'm mighty nice
For now you and me never met
I'll take all I can get

Band/Lyrics Promotion Thread Post your band get critiques
 

accualy i am not....i just dont like them.
i do like punk, but i also saw the who and eric clapton last summer....
ANd jello kicks as.s.....but no i am not punk and i do not try to be one...but i do go to shows and support the scene...
but your just mad becasue i dont like your band, get over it

hey my bands called Eyes on Skies!
check out this song lol
http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=81mOjOrm2DY&feature=channel_video_title

and if you want to download our ep free (legally): www.noisetrade.com/eyesonskies

Hey! I know it's a little late, but let's try this out.
Band:This Glorious Tragedy
Genre:Metalcore
Link: www.myspace.com/thisglorioustragedy
www.facebook.com/thisglorioustragedy
Song: As The Bridges Burn
Lyrics: I actually don't know them, and I'm fairly certian our singer doesnt either.
But, we've gotten a better screamer since the EP was recorded, and we'll be going to a new producer soon.

does it have to be your own band..?
 

i'm a big fan of unsigned music so can i post a few gems i've uncovered?

Deserters
 

http://www.facebook.com/desertersmusic
http://www.soundcloud.com/deserters

Broken Knuckles and No One's Proud:

(You failed yourself)
I spit in every mouth that offered help
(We all lost out)
I've broken both my hands just beating myself
(Everyday)
Another mountain blocks the [I]son[/I] from my eyes.
(I can't see)
A reason to keep up this joke of a life.

Fuck you, look me in the fucking eyes.
I refuse to be beaten by myself.
So alone, I don't believe my only own lies.
I'd smash you, the reflection's gone,
but I can only
see
hate
clearer
than it's ever been before.
I've lost every battle to end the war.

Broken knuckles and no one's proud.
Shattered glass,
Shattered glass and no one's proud.

Plant a little seed and nature grows
Niagara falls and the pyramids
Everything you believed in as kids
Fucking rainbows after it rains
there's enough miracles here to blow your brains
I fed a fish to a pelican at Frisco bay
It tried to eat my cell phone, he ran away

I need feedback please, if you'd be so kind :)
the album is already out but we're starting to record again as soon as we've rehearsed the new songs ... so any review of the mix, sound, song, lyrics or whatever comes to mind would be greatly aprecciated

http://soundcloud.com/danarbed/understanding-the-freedom-1


[B][U]Understanding the Freedom[/U][/B]

Understanding now how it is
I can and I will do whatever I please
Learning so much in a short amount of time
Going away these feelings that suffocate

Can't you see? Or more like “Can't you hear?”
I'm wide awake, though I may
not be here but I am someplace else,
Where you'll probably never see

Happiness tires me
I'm not afraid, but I am drained
I know my soul is deflated
I'll get some music and recharge it.
I am free to stay happy
Stay living, keep dying.
I could do anything
I'm free to do anything

Don't want what I need
Don't need what I want
I can see myself bleed
From poor decisions and circumstance

I'm so glad, I'm not sad, it isn't any fun
Goodbye stress I'll miss you less, than night misses the sun.
Learning to use and falling in love with freedom
I'm afraid when I open my eyes all this will be gone

It's all so easy now
'Cause I know exactly how...
Know what to say
Finding my way
There's only today
No fucking yesterday!