Band/Lyrics Promotion Thread: Post your band, get critiques!
Quick idea I got the other day. Let's whore bands here and request for lyrical/overall performance comments on them!
I will be in here making critiques and what not (since that's what I'm [i]supposed to do[/i] in the end) and some other critical doings will be allowed. The rules are simple: In your post, include: Band name Genre Webpage/Myspace/Links to music Small description Lyrics basically that's it have fun :) |
band: the sunflower maiden
genre: weird, fantasy, comedy, spoken word, folk, smile-a-bit music: [url]http://www.myspace.com/thesunflowermaiden[/url] description: comedy folk talkie songs about strange things dont have the lyrics typed too many song: island land its like spoken word set to fairly elaborate music/ambience/effects. its not quite music, its not quite just words. its a peculiar amalgamation of both that im really interested in, like 21st century minstrelsy, a genre not explored often today |
Hey Tojes!
Behold the Harlot ( [url]http://www.myspace.com/beholdtheharlot[/url] ) is my band. I would try to classify a genre for us, but too many people are soo picky and annoying about which genre = what. I would say deathcore or something along the lines but who knows. I play the drums, so I don't know or have the lyrics, sorry. But we're just five guys with no money trying to have fun, making the style of music we like. Not too much more than that. Any questions or comments, I'd be glad to address them. Take a listen! :thumb: |
Spoonful: Reminds me of a calmer, down-beat animal collective. I like it. I'd give a larger introspective on the lyrics but... well, no one featured any!
The music is also pretty soft; it's a nice counterpart of the rest going on in the background, gives it a certain ambience. I like it. For a larger introspective maybe the lyrical content should be provided? |
Hey there
My band: Pool of Radiance Genre: Rock/Screamo Music Link: [url]www.myspace.com/poolofradiance[/url] Song: Light In The Dark Lyrics: You can hear them distinctly in the song These are rough unmixed/unmastered demos but tell me what you think! |
hah, i remember that game. the old version only had like three colors.
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[QUOTE=slack;17053222]hah, i remember that game. the old version only had like three colors.[/QUOTE]
haha yes i heard it was some very old D&D game or something But im only 17 so i wouldnt even have known that :P I just think for a band the name is really cool =] |
Hi these are links to my music
myspace.com/michaelwillow http://miketheblacksheep.wordpress.com/ you can give me feedback if you like |
sounds great Michael
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NAME: OBELISKS
GENRE: POPULAR SONG AND DANCE LINK: www.myspace.com/mwandtheobelisks SONGS: MANY SONGS AVAILABLE We are Obelisks. If You like Obelisks You can be an Obelisks Friend on www.myspace.com. Please tell Us what You think of our dumb song. |
Some cool sounds going on here! Kudos to you guys, sounds great.
I would like some honest critique on my lyrics - I have only actually been writing lyrics for my tracks for approx. ½ year! Name: T7 Genre: Electronica Link: http://www.myspace.com/t7onlinedk Song: Rusty Introducing bad words into your speech Pessimism flows out whenever you speak Why won't you see that you seem to... to be aging me Poor health, bad breath - you don't even notice Feeling rusty, unskilled, not satisfied Decreased velocity, so slow Stick it up to me "I don't feel well, I won't do it today" Watching telly just won't make you behave Now, we are through 'cause you seem to... To be killing you |
hi all i'm just trying to get some interest for one of my work mates music, he writes, sings and plays all the instruments then edits it all together to make his own music videos, here's one of his videos.
what do you think? [url]http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=sEkytaJOgSs[/url] |
Hi! I would like to offer you my funny positive song [B]The Magic Hit ![/B] ! You can listen it here [url]http://www.sexyflavia.com/music/Majic_Hit.mp3[/url]
I'm songwriter, composer and singer. |
I started writing music recently. I have a couple songs complete. I'm just going by my name right now, but a friend of mine is helping me write them and sing. I'm basically just acoustic right now. We're thinking of getting a tambourine soon, though!
Anyway, I have two original songs, "Sudden Stranger," and "Every Cloud." They're on my purevolume. http://www.purevolume.com/WillBoes You asked for lyrics too, so I'll post a a little taste from "Every Cloud"... Listen, can't you see? Somethings out there are worth finding. Listen, can't you see? Every cloud has silver lining. Don't you want your world filled with light? I'd love any feedback. |
It's not my band, but As Blood Runs Black is having vocal tryouts and this is my take on it:
http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=cYMycrvWLsc the lyrics (written by me) are: I've walked this way before, broken glass doesn't bother calloused feet. I took a hammer to your hourglass frame, while you rested your eyes on the concrete. You will remain: unforgivable. You ****ing bitch. Heaven may intervene, but this rage could tear the wings from angels. I watched you bleed the sand of every Goddamn chance you ever had. And when you feel life slip away find comfort in the warmth of the asphalt. Slowing sighs see no sympathy.. And when you feel life slip away find comfort in the warmth of the asphalt. Slowing sighs see no sympathy from me. You remain unforgiven. Unforgivable. I previously had an entire story about it written for my own band's song, but I shortened and tweaked it to try with their instrumental. First post by the way! :D |
- The Asian Goat Project -
Punk-Rockish / Freedom asiangoatproject@gmail.com http://myspace.com/asiangoatproject Lyrics are easy to make out in songs. New album "Beautiful Distance" is there to listen - recommended loud, recommend you listen to it from start to finish in one sitting (29 min). Headphones and ambient lighting also recommended, but not explicitly required. If you like - can buy for the low price of $1.40 here: http://www.mymusicstream.com/theasiangoatproject If you like it a lot, ask me for a free copy and I may be inclined to send it to you... Go nuts. |
[COLOR="Blue"]Band Name:[/COLOR] Stone Birds
[COLOR="Blue"]Genre:[/COLOR] Alternative (aka Modern) Folk [COLOR="Blue"]Website(s):[/COLOR] [url]purevolume.com/jakefolkrock[/url] and [url]myspace.com/stonebirdies[/url] [COLOR="Blue"]Description: [/COLOR] In 2007 i wrote a song called "Heroes" (Streams from myspace) which almost instantly became popular in my town with a little help from Dan Parson, who wrote the music to it. on sep. 10 and sep. 12 it was performed by the JH choir at my school. i was featured in a newpaper called Plattsmouth Journal. in late 2008 i started to write songs and list them under the name "Stone Birds", my second most popular song became "Zenith Observer" (Streams on myspace) a more electro based song than what i usually do. then while trying and failing to release albums i decided to instead of worrying on release, to more worry on actually writing and recording. now my first Self-titled album is planned to be released in september. "If I Fell Into Black Water" (streams on purevolume) was entered into an online compilation and was review well, and has become the 3rd most popular song of mine. |
[B]Band name:[/B] AIDS Mercury, but we're changing the name back to Minipope
[B]Genre:[/B] grind [B] Webpage:[/B] [url]http://myspace.com/aidsmercurylv[/url] [B]Small description:[/B] the song on there is just some improv on rough ideas, we're working on so more complete ideas now, and its coming out kind of like this (minus the weird last minute), but with heavy Botch and Converge influence. [B]Lyrics:[/B] I make threads with lreally brief yrics a lot for a reason. |
Band: On Ions...
Genre: Folk/Indie/Post Hardcore Album: Map Of The South Pacific Description: Production isn't that good but it sort of adds to the aesthetic. It's all songs I've written and I play every instrument on it. It is what it is. Lyrics: This is what I enjoy the most about my music. The lyrics should be on the mp3 files. Link: http://www.mediafire.com/?ijkizzyjmwm |
7 Words
7 WORDS
Rock/Space Blues/Metal? :chug: I guess we would be hard rock with a singer who sounds like Grace Slick and a sister who can sing like an angel and scream like a demon. Its like alot of things but different. http://www.myspace.com/7wordslive Sorry, I didnt include the lyrics. But, please listen and let us know what you think. |
My band changed our name to Ayehaetdad.
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Band name: The Longtooth Collective
Genre: Metal/hardcore Webpage: www.myspace.com/thelongtoothcollective The song is Seventh Reincarnation, you can download here: http://www.sendspace.com/file/ihzgl3 You thought I was trying to give some grandiose gesture As if I’d recognize your things as anything but things Wanker… Wanker… Wanker… You're not much different than me No we are not the same… You’re breaking their legs at the shins I see your sick ****in’ grins! Why?! Why do you?! Why?! Why do you?! Blood stains your tear soaked face Ashes of bodies taint your embrace You won’t quit, you won’t let up now You think they’re cool with it? Like they’re so delplet-ed that they didn’t know what freedom was Oh this rings a bell? Like you’ve never been to hell? Why are we putting ourselves in- Why do you push us in and laugh? And laugh?! And laugh? Don’t you feel pain? Don’t you feel pain? And laugh?! And laugh?! Don’t you also feel pain? Winding and twirling into a vast hole of nothing Bound to catch up, bound to find the trail The sick, the dark, the frail The dying, the lost, the Braille The light, the health, the strength, I’m building it all back up To keep myself on top of it Mommy, tell me again why we die? Daddy why do you and mommy lie? “Stay calm child, you're hysterical You're asking questions that I'm not fit to answer Not in this life" In which life then In your sixth or your seventh? When I’m a bird, when I’m a lion, when I’m a whale Perhaps it'd be more honest to unveil Our worst secrets Or maybe I should stay stale And be the one who’s afraid to share… Afraid to share? Are you afraid to share? Afraid to share? Are you afraid to share? Why’s it so hard?! Why is it so hard?! Why’s it so hard?! Why is it so hard?! Can you deal with the honest answer? Can you even comprehend what’s going wrong? God, Allah, Satan and Mickey Mouse Your best friend and your spouse Are we even here or is this some rock amongst rocks? This fear: where does it all come from?!? Come from?!? Come from?! Where does it all come from?! When will we know? When will you show your honest feelings? Is it true in your heart? What you honestly feel.. What you honestly feel… |
Band name: The Longtooth Collective
Genre: Metal/hardcore Webpage: www.myspace.com/thelongtoothcollective This is the other song I put vox on. It's called Space and Time Inverted. You can download the file here: http://www.sendspace.com/file/c24ihk Acid fried with a butcher’s knife What a discomfited strife Try to control someone else’s life Wave it around in my face Pace around the room There’s not even the slightest trace Your sanity was lost Space and time \invert/ time and space Stay awake at night, (alert) He’ll find you under your… (Bed) Don’t even like you in town Your face, getting us all… Made in the US of A, not what they were hoping for Obeyed until you didn’t see it worth your time Find the answers: They were right in front of you You say “Don’t look me in the eye at all It makes me feel so small You’re just another tool I use Not my friend, it was just a ruse” You fessed up to it all Why do you make others feel small? You demean An obscenely rude routine You say, “Drag you to my Hellish realm To feel seldom… Happiness… It’s like it was never there” Sinking, drowning: father, do you like my hair? “No son, dinner’s done” Thought that I was safe Stumbled synapse waif Nothing is the same Truth can’t be contained When all the lies become your king Bleeding out my eyes “Embellish all my lies” Trying to escape Pulling all of your own weight AHHHHHHHHHH! You are so irate Add on more and more Act like this was all in there before Daytime never shone it’s light on us Alaska’s coldest whores will ride the bus When it’s time to leave this station Mental flex, just concentration You can’t fix what isn’t latent And if you thought that this was blatant |
I'm just new to this forum and would like some feed back on my songs if pos. I really struggle with lyrics and think mine all sound cheesy but a friend told me that a lot of songwriters feel like this. If you get a chance check out my songs at http://www.tonymusic.co.cc cheers guys.
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Hey I'm just a writer and I would love to hear what you think of my work...
Here is something I'm working on right now Time is such a tick on the mind just when you want it stop or just slow down it never wants to stand still but time is never on your side when hurts too much to breathe that’s when it slows down nothing seems to pass you’re stuck in the moment because it’s never on your side when your world falls apart jebirdsingsasong.com |
Hey everyone my band is called Atticus and Ike, we play indie rock.
http://www.myspace.com/atticusandike this is our home-recorded 4-song demo. Lyrics: Phantom Thorns I am a red-clay ramblin man god's thunder kissed my hand her eyes made intercourse look tame now they're dead and peeking out my picture frame her clothes used to hand out on the hangers in the hall now they clothe ghosts and their rhymes rise and fall long and tall chorus im moving too fast spreading way too thin your thorns are too deep they're breaking my phantom limbs yesterday i soared through soiled fields killing 'Cong and cuttin deals i gripped a grenade clenched my teeth and howled get a load of my steely-eyed shrapnel scowl now the only thing that's steel are the spokes on my wheelchair wheels i felt my phantom limb reach for a gun i tell you these gooks are still on the run where i started from still on the run on the run on the run on the run again chorus |
i thought atticus was a t-shirt brand :|
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Our recently bedroom-recorded, self-cooked X-mas song goes very well with the "What are you drinking now" thread :)
http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=C4Z-shtikB0 We wanted to describe our situation more precisely than former X-mas carols:evil::D Have fun and help spreading the disease :) DaZedMan |
Yes that's exactly what we did!
We recorded a 7 song EP in our Dorm room at our Army AIT with minimal recording equipment or money/professional stuff. But it came out damn good! The group i'm in is a rap/hiphop/freestyle group. We have the temporary name of Tha Mad Dawgs(Based on where were stationed at for our Army AIT) haha. But that name is only here for us until we find a permanent name that sticks and stands out. We have 7 tracks up on our myspace right now, And I personally am on 2 of them(My name is Spin-It). So far everyone thinks our tracks are pretty good so I'm hoping people on here will like it! http://www.myspace.com/corrystationboys We would LOVE any feedback that you have for us And if you like us then please add us to myspace and let us know you added us because of this site! Thanks -Mike Smith AKA Spin-It |
hey i hope you can check out my friend's songs at:
http://www.myspace.com/aliavery she has a lot of talent, but is too shy to get herself out there. lemme know what you think of her singing! thanks! -jacky |
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