Audio of my band

[Lvshorty610]

Check out: http://www.soundclick.com/bands/7/belovedtragedymusic.htm

download falling darkness first, seems to be the favorite

[broknrekord3]

sounds awesome man, show me some of those licks sometime :D

[exploited]

ahhh dude to cool for school do u have a webpage so i can buy stuff

[broknrekord3]

i cant tab out that little lead/solo thing you repeat like 50 times, anyone able to get that?

[chimp_spanner]

Hey! nice song man, I liked it. Reminds me of a sort of mixture of Mars Volta, Hundred Reasons, ATDI etc. etc. You all sound tight as a band, so no reason you couldn't do something with this. I suppose my only suggestion would be to perhaps bring something unique to the genre, something that stylistically defines you as a band. You influences are very clear and apparent, and obviously that's not a bad thing. Everyone is influenced by someone! But perhaps in the future, expand on those influences, create an aspect of your music that will make people listen to your songs and say "hey, check it out - that's Beloved Tragedy!!! :) But other than that, yeah i liked it. Good performances all round, look foward to hearing more.

*thumbs up*

[italic zero]

get a singer and people will really start to catch on, you sound great.
i started to sing random words and melodies... sorry, i'll stop now

[olw244]

get a new bassist

[SkaterNick14]

sweeeeeet you guys have a really tight sound good riffs and song composition

[Bad Influence]

great song!

[Zakka]

Good stuff man :)

I think the guy wants the riff thats kind of: ( from the darkness song)


E----------------------------------------------------------
B-----------------------------------------7----7----7----
G--------------------------------------------9----9---9--
D---7--7--9--7--7h9h10---7---9----------------------
A
E


Hope it will help ;)

you really sound like oldier stuff of ATDI or Taking Back Sunday... it's preety good )

[italic zero]

sorry for typing this but i had to... i can't get the name "Our Beloved Tragedy" out of my head... don't change your name by any means i just had to write it... strange compulsion

[broknrekord3]

zakka thats exactly what i was talkin about haha thanks dude

[cijakid440]

awesome song i would like to hear the final version when you get it

[Icaross]

wow.. it sounds really great! I too would love to hear the final version :)

[FiReISNTsoFuN]

falling darkness rocks my face off.

kinda reminds me of alexisonfire... in fact i can imagine their lead guy screaming along to the song in my head... what kinda singer do you have, and what kinda genre are you guys going for?

[iantheguitarman]

Really nice songs!!! :) All the riffs fits together...You do kinda little solos and we don't see this a lot today in music...you put efffects between this and it makes something very cool...great job and I would like to ear the songs with a singer soon...:) :D

Very good!!!

[guitarliz]

that was so cool, i will look forward 2 cn ur name in lights wen u r rich nd famous!!! seriously i hope that sumday me nd my band will b able 2 write nd play like that. nd i love the way that u all call him dude in here, sweet! sorry an essex girl doesnt normally hear dude! like the name as well, is there ne reason 4 it?

[pee_riz]

its good but you definetly need some voice ,a sound like inme would bring out the buzz a bit more
good luck

[thebends]

thats sweet man
cool guitar riffs

[Lvshorty610]

thank you all... and my singer is hardcore... screamer

[madthumbs]

whats ya band name?

[Lucifer404]

Originally posted by lvshorty610
thank you all... and my singer is hardcore... screamer


that will ruin the mood ur songs create

find someone with a melodic voice, it will fit much better

[Lucifer404]

ull have to tab out those songs to, they all sound pretty cool riff wise, you guys definatly have talent

[askantik]

Originally posted by lvshorty610
Check out: http://www.soundclick.com/bands/7/belovedtragedymusic.htm

download falling darkness first, seems to be the favorite

this rocks... whats your guitar setup? amp/guitar/effects and stuff... and do you guys need a webpage? im decent... aim me oneeightsevenxx

[SchismBassist]

Dude that is awesome.

[SchismBassist]

Reminds me of Thrice and Thursday.

[UserNamesSuck]

"Obession" was the only one that was good imo...but good work!

[Dancin' Man]

a melodic singer. preferably someone with a massive range but at least someone who can hit high notes. but not a screamer. the music could really benifit from a good melodic voice. a sound maybe like the singer from "ours" would work really well i thik. falcetto and such would soud really cool in the heavy parts. you also have amillion really nice openings for a cool lyric where most everything else kinda dies off and some profound words would fit nicely then explode into the next part. good work write more songs like falling darkness. adrenalin was too spastic sounding too rushed but falling darkness despite being fast had a more fulfilling sound too it so it was able to match the speed.

[askantik]

Originally posted by askantik
this rocks... whats your guitar setup? amp/guitar/effects and stuff... and do you guys need a webpage? im decent... aim me oneeightsevenxx

ello?

[Griffin_Page]

The stuff sounds good.. but reminds too much of the whole emo genre, which I'm not too fond of. But everyone else enjoys it.

[TragicPsycho]

****, that's some good stuff. keep up the nice work

[Ganondorf]

A singer, kinda like Cedric Bixler would fit your band.

[mr siCk star]

the songs were cool and well played. but way too long in my opinion...

but I'm not really a metal fan anyway so... the songs flowed nicely.

good job.

[Lvshorty610]

hey, sorry... ok, i use a PRS Tremonti SE upgraded to real Tremonti pickups, which i run thru morley wah pedal, which is hooked up to boss flanger, to mxr phase shifter thingy, to marshall dsl... and no, we dont ahve a webpage, but were not overly serious about getting a label or anything... were just having fun

[thursdaythrice]

this is amazing u sound a million times better then some bands today

great work

[shorty517824]

that kicks ***!! do u ever think u'll have a cd out or anything, i'd buy it.

[wonderllama]

dude you need a ****ing singer! that is some sweet guitar you got going, put it has soooo much potential for vocals. Like I am singing along and I havent even heard the whole thing yet... find a singer and you have a hit song! seriously, get a bloody singer!

[hacked_to_pieces]

excellent you guys rock

[blade_nem]

sounds very awesome! reminds me kinda of thrice. it really sounds awesome! i love the riffs

[ThePuro]

ok...yo definitely don't want a screamer...at least not for falling darkness, you want someone with a melodic voice whwo can sing/scream when needed...and maybe scream, but the quiet part you efinitely want melodic and the loud part you want a sora singing sorta screaming...or maybe that's just what i want you to have. Yea i usually don't listen to this kind of music but i think this is really good.

[gethitintheface]

a screamer would work but dont over do it

[Andy_Guitar]

your music kicks ***, I'm sorry but it's too great for my words to explain. You will go somewhere in life if you keep this up and develop amazing lyrics to go with your amazing music.

new fav. indie band :)

[drunksublimejunk]

Your song is awsome. Add a singer and it would be even better than it already is.

[bryce40oz]

rad band

[SyntaxGnome]

you guys could go far if you don't screw around. get your singer and get a professional recording then play some shows and get known. it's nice to know some bands actually have talent these days... you guys have alot more talent then half the **** I hear on the radio. thank you...

[Deepsoul]

that was really good...(applauds)

[Lvshorty610]

Originally posted by Andy_Guitar
new fav. indie band :)

indie? lol, havent heard that one yet...

but seriously, i thank you all for what you guys have said... i guess only time tells how much we progress... were actually almost done mixing falling darkness with our singer... theres a few parts where he screams, but most of it is softer stuff... if we ever do finish mixing, ill post it when its done.

[kevbeardrums]

dude, you guys are awesome...those licks are sweet...the only criticism i have is the bass drum sounds like cardboard...maybe a bigger bassier mic for that next time...but man the music is sweet, let me know if you guys ever come by charlotte

[Thirium]

Hey man great stuff you guys got there. It sounds really great even without a singer. It's great to see when people got their act together. Hope you guys do go somewhere with your music because you have it down real good.

[Thirium]

Hey man great stuff you guys got there. It sounds really great even without a singer. It's great to see when people got their act together. Hope you guys do go somewhere with your music because you have it down real good.

[broknrekord3]

can someone figure out the tabs for that intro in adrenaline..its stuck in my head and i cant figure it out!!!:angry:

[Fatal-Division]

awsome work guys........I really love the instrumentals you guys write.....it reminds me of Thursday and other hardcore bands...alot like Atreyu my favorite band in the hardcore genre I think if you broke it down somewhat like Varkataz(leadsinger of Atreyu) you guys could get a nice blend with a screaming vocalist but not all screamers would work..perhaps one similar to the vocalist for the Mars Volta

[diamondschwin]

you guys most remind me of this band Funeral For a Friend... they are on an indie label from wales... but now there have a 7 song ep available at most FYEs oddly enough.... i think some distribution deal went down there... but anyway... you guys are sick.... i think its really awesome... and i mean your def. pegging into the emo/metal/ punk genre but you guys def. seem to hang with the best of them... keep up the good work... and keep at it... i mean you can go to college and still have a little cd out no harm in that :-D

[Idonthaveascreenname]

awesome band dude!

[RaDiOhEaD_fAn]

Well I'd buy an album if you made one
:cool:

[josh782]

This is my style of music :thumb:

Before I praise you, I must also say that the bassdrum sounds weak, and it definately does need a lower and "beefier" sound.

Anyway...
Really well put together, the music and structure all goes so well together, and I can easily imagine words being sung to it. When you release an album, I'll be your number 1 fan :D

[the_only_singer]

Pretty good, nothing I would enjoy listening to however. Definately need a singer. And there were points where I just got bored.

[311Gr8rthenAll]

Question for ya, what do you guys use to record?

[caterpillar]

****, i really wanna hear your stuff now,but this, or anything else from sound lcick doesn't work on my computer. Anyone got suggestions to make it work? or alternatives?

[311Gr8rthenAll]

sign up, and download it as mp3 not hi-fi or lo-fi

[Lvshorty610]

Originally posted by 311Gr8rthenAll
Question for ya, what do you guys use to record?

we put up some shure microphones to our amps, run em thru our mixer, and record with acid pro 4.0

[rik]

I like it. very good

[Floor_13]

Hey lol I heard "Darkness Falling" from Soundclick and I didn't even mean to! I didn't realize it was your band!! I thought it was awesome man good job!!! I really liked how it all flowed together. The guitars were sweet and well, I really liked it :thumb:

If you have time, listen to one (or 3) of songs from my band. Don't keep your hopes up though :D

www.bandfloor13.com/song.html

[LeJoiX]

Check out: http://www.soundclick.com/bands/7/belovedtragedymusic.htm

download falling darkness first, seems to be the favorite

well the me messing around you should delete from there. if it tried to be a shredding demonstration you totally didn't achieve that. Other than that it's an ok american teen-music.

[thursdaythrice]

i added it to my favourites

[afi-bmx]

Wow man that sounds really good. I really enjoyed it. Good job.

[ill_fortune]

Bad ***!!!!!!!

[ill_fortune]

Dude these songs are freakin awesome!! you could really get some were, u just need a singer, but i like it alot!! with out it to

[guitarfreakguy101]

ivshorty610 showing off some skills...

see kids, thats what a prs tremonti se and skill can do for you?

that was quite good, you most definitely need a vocalist for your band. the style of music that i heard from the song and the other 2 sounds like a combination between thurdsday, finch, thrice, and some punk mixed in... i dunno if thats the kind of music you want to make but it sounds awesome to me.

good job man :thumb:

[marcusthecat]

sounds freaking awesome. really great riffs and all. get a singer and you could probably get a record deal.

[Lvshorty610]

ivshorty610 showing off some skills...

see kids, thats what a prs tremonti se and skill can do for you?

that was quite good, you most definitely need a vocalist for your band. the style of music that i heard from the song and the other 2 sounds like a combination between thurdsday, finch, thrice, and some punk mixed in... i dunno if thats the kind of music you want to make but it sounds awesome to me.

good job man :thumb:

Aggh, :lol:

It's LVshorty, not iv!!! Its kinda cool that people just know that I play a PRS Tremonti SE... did you read that in this thread, or had you known that? And who knows what kind of genre we are going for... we never officially decided. We just kinda... write music :lol:

[guitarfreakguy101]

Aggh,

It's LVshorty, not iv!!! Its kinda cool that people just know that I play a PRS Tremonti SE... did you read that in this thread, or had you known that? And who knows what kind of genre we are going for... we never officially decided. We just kinda... write music

seriously, thats like the 345983459 time i messed up your name :upset: i keep on thinking that lower case "l" is a upper case "I."

and about the PRS thing, thats how i sorta recognize you...

lvyshorty = prs tremonti se w/ real mark tremonti pickups and white pickup rings

[Lvshorty610]

seriously, thats like the 345983459 time i messed up your name :upset: i keep on thinking that lower case "l" is a upper case "I."

and about the PRS thing, thats how i sorta recognize you...

lvyshorty = prs tremonti se w/ real mark tremonti pickups and white pickup rings

I find that rather entertaining actually thats how I am recognized. No worries, I think 4/5 times someone writes my name on these forums, they use an "I" insead of "L". Every so often I see someone that writes an "L", I get excited, its actually pretty pathetic :lol:. I dont know if you were joking or not, but "ivyshorty"?? (See the underlined/bold/italic part of your quote). Man, you dont know how much I get that too. Where do people get the "Y"??? I see it all the time... :confused:

But yeah, thats me dude... you also forgot about the white pickup selector knob :thumb:

http://www.musicianforums.com/forums/attachment.php?attachmentid=10437&stc=1

[musicmanco]

dude that song goes on forever its alright.. it just sounds like everyother local band out today "the used" "finch" all those stupid new bands you would fit rite in that catigory doesnt impress me

[shadedlife]

I think "falling darkness" goes on for too long, but has some good song ideas. you guys sound tight. good job.

[guitarfreakguy101]

dont know if you were joking or not, but "ivyshorty"?? (See the underlined/bold/italic part of your quote). Man, you dont know how much I get that too. Where do people get the "Y"??? I see it all the time...

i think someone should really shoot me... yea i didn't notice i put the y in your name, i think its because im trying to be too gramatically correct. because when i see "iv" i think "ivy".

[Lvshorty610]

dude that song goes on forever its alright.. it just sounds like everyother local band out today "the used" "finch" all those stupid new bands you would fit rite in that catigory doesnt impress me

I'm sorry you didn't like it. We like to think its more than just what every other local band out there does today... it seems to me, most bands out there are playing power-chord styled songs, and just recycling power chords over and over for an entire album. I'd like to believe that we do much more than that for our songs, but if you didn't like it, then you didn't like it. Sorry :(

[korsakoff]

falling darkness sounds really good...i enjoyed it
keep it up

[tomacann]

im downloading it just now.. this better be ****ing good!

[tomacann]

:thumb:

thats all im saying really... everything else has been said

:thumb:

[Lvshorty610]

im downloading it just now.. this better be ****ing good!

Glad it was worth your time :thumb:

[Im_A_Ninja]

love it... especialy falling darkness, get a vocalist... one who can both scream and sing very well, it would work quite good. Melodic singing is some parts, and gut wrenching screaming in others.

[AcidBath]

Mildly decent. When you are all jamming out mellow, it sounds wonderful, then a huge loud annoying heavy part breaks in and kills it.

[flamey088]

have u put any of your tabs on mxtabs.net?

[tgadrummer]

Falling Darkness and Obsession were really good. If you guys come out with an album, I'll buy it too. You definitely need a singer - I agree something in the style of The Mars Volta might work. I'm not real into screaming but it's effective in small doses.

[Lvshorty610]

have u put any of your tabs on mxtabs.net?

Heh heh, not quite... who would ever look for those tabs? We aren't on a record label, so these songs arent mass produced. 99.99% of the guitar world has never heard of us (that .01% being you people in this thread, and my family and friends)... so who would ever look for our tabs? If I posted a tab, its like I'm just trying to get my material ripped off :lol:

[drummerdunc86]

darkness rocked.

i wish i had a guitar player that good... :(

[flamey088]

Heh heh, not quite... who would ever look for those tabs? We aren't on a record label, so these songs arent mass produced. 99.99% of the guitar world has never heard of us (that .01% being you people in this thread, and my family and friends)... so who would ever look for our tabs? If I posted a tab, its like I'm just trying to get my material ripped off :lol:

lol u could say that, or say that your stuff is copyrighted. Thats what one of my friends did, and no one has ripped off his stuff so yeah. So have u tried getting onto any labels?

[Sleepwalker]

Did you take Falling Darkness off? It says there's only 9 songs for Beloved Tragedy, and Falling Darkness isn't there (yet there's 9 songs listed). Obsession is great, though. I'm not sure if I agree with everyone on you getting a vocalist though, because that can make or break a great band like this. Just make sure he's badass if you do. ;)

[Jet Black Stare]

Ya where is falling darkness

[Lvshorty610]

Ahh, sorry guys... I did take it off very briefly, but I will reupload it. Apologies.

[Reflection]

You said your vocalist was a hardcore screamer... I think you guys would sound a lot like Alexisonfire if you recorded with him. I dunno about anyone else but I just get the alexis vibe from your music.

[Westy]

wikid band

[NoHoper]

veeeeeeeeeryyyyyyyy nice stuff. One thing i'd Like to say tho. *huh humm*

You can Have too much of a good thing. (The riff goes on a bit)

[Lvshorty610]

veeeeeeeeeryyyyyyyy nice stuff. One thing i'd Like to say tho. *huh humm*

You can Have too much of a good thing. (The riff goes on a bit)

Yeah, we recorded it like that because at the time of recording, we planned on putting in lyrics... and most songs you hear with lyrics being sung, the verses are sung usually over the same guitar progressions... so we repeated alot in order to compensate for lyrics, and can adjust and take sections out later if needed. The philosophy was that it was better to record to much and take out what you dont need, as opposed to not recording enough and try and add back in later. So we have alot of repetition to accomdate for lyrics

[GuitarComet]

I d/led Falling Darkness.
Even though this is a little harder than my usual, I liked it very much!

Great Production :thumb:
Excellent Song (writting/arrangment) :thumb:
Good mix
great dynamics :thumb:
The song begs for a vocal line, maybe like Ronnie James Dio style
Overall rating: 8 out of 10
You'd get 9 if there was a vocal track. (even a bad one) :lol:

[shadedlife]

good stuff - the drums seemed a little off at times, but otherwise, it was solid. maybe if the clean/distorted guitar parts weren't so different in volume, it would sound better. really good song though.

[Lvshorty610]

I d/led Falling Darkness.
Even though this is a little harder than my usual, I liked it very much!

Great Production :thumb:
Excellent Song (writting/arrangment) :thumb:
Good mix
great dynamics :thumb:
The song begs for a vocal line, maybe like Ronnie James Dio style
Overall rating: 8 out of 10
You'd get 9 if there was a vocal track. (even a bad one) :lol:

I can add a mix of me talking real briefly over it for about 10 seconds if you want... :lol:

That would consitute as bad...

[Spliggity Splot(I got banned)]

wut'd U use to record?

[Lvshorty610]

Some high quality microphones and Acid Pro 4.0 :thumb:

[slipknot666maggot]

Circle has a nice solo

[ProfessorChaos]

WOW! I think i just crapped my pants, you guys are incredible, but like everybody else said... VOCALS!!! Make sure you get a good vocalist though, i think vocals can make or break a song :thumb:

[himster]

Thats Coolio stuff

[laucaus]

i like..........a lot

[Domino_guitar]

Dude that is awesome.


dam nice go pro dudes

[Sep]

That's absolutely awesome! I wish my band could write stuff like that. :thumb:

[Sep]

You should record Falling Darkness with a vocalist. I've already put it onto my mp3 player :).

[Lvshorty610]

You should record Falling Darkness with a vocalist. I've already put it onto my mp3 player :).

I dont particularly care, but how did you rip it? How do you rip streaming music? Ive always wanted to know how to do that, :lol:

[bov]

just wondering, how long have the guitarists been playing?

[Lvshorty610]

I have been playing guitar for three years

[flamey088]

three years, your alright for three years, likei mean some ppl who have been playing for 3 years cannot do a thing at all. In ur version of Satch's Circles, did u just wing it, or did u learn it?

[Sep]

I dont particularly care, but how did you rip it? How do you rip streaming music? Ive always wanted to know how to do that, :lol:

I just downloaded the mp3. :)

[Lvshorty610]

three years, your alright for three years, likei mean some ppl who have been playing for 3 years cannot do a thing at all. In ur version of Satch's Circles, did u just wing it, or did u learn it?

What do you mean by "wing it"? I did look at the tab while learning it, but I can admit there were small little sections where I maybe changed up a note or so. So I learned most of it, but I might have "winged it" for a few notes here and there.

[flamey088]

yeah thats cool, its not like everyone is going to get all those notes completely right, i know i dont get all the notes completely right.

so how long have ur band been together?

[WuZisIZ]

Nice.
I liked your originals better than the covers. Falling darkness was the best.
I think I glanced over the thread and saw you said your singer was a screamer? Nah...that ain't gonna work. You guys deserve better. But not a wimp singer either, someone forceful but not screaming.

[Lvshorty610]

Nice.
I liked your originals better than the covers. Falling darkness was the best.
I think I glanced over the thread and saw you said your singer was a screamer? Nah...that ain't gonna work. You guys deserve better. But not a wimp singer either, someone forceful but not screaming.

Well, it was a screamer at first, but we decided to tone it down a bit from that... were not totally sure what we are doing, and parts of it will definitely still have that hardcore touch... but not necessarily screaming.



yeah thats cool, its not like everyone is going to get all those notes completely right, i know i dont get all the notes completely right.

so how long have ur band been together?

I just kinda play Circles for fun... and the band has been together for probably over 2 years. I'm not even sure.

[flamey088]

well keep the band together, and honestly i believe, but this might just be me, but if u want a front man, someone who represents your band, make it someone who is already in your band, because getting a singer in who just sings is well good, but it often takes the focus away from ur bands actuall phenomenal instrumental talent. Also a lot of ppl naturally presume that the singer owns the band, and i hate that!

[sleepyberto]

hey check my band out we are called Fragile Dreams we have 2 mp3s to dl tell me what you think on our guestbook www.fragiledreamsband.com
If u just want to get the mp3s this is the link www.fragiledreamsband.com/Mp3s.html

:thumb: :evil:

[RichHunt]

Last time I checked this thread was for this guys band, not yours.


Also, I don't like how the quality of the mp3 crackles when it all gets loud, very ugly.

Nice work though, I'm quite enjoying it.

Also, how do you rip streaming music? Under volume settings, instead of selecting microphone under recording, you select Stereo Mix :)

[vodkapuddle]

I believe you have to go to Control Panel - Sounds - Advanced Volume Controls - Click Options - Click Properties - Check Recording - And select Stereo Mix

[lifesonguitarist]

man thats good music, keep it up :thumb:

[gaslight]

Very impressive track.

Congratulations :thumb:.

[turboblues]

Cool sounding band. Keep it up!

[Music_is_life]

dude that is ****ing awesome!!! you guys are amazing and i agree with almost everyone else, someone witha nice powerful voice that can hit some high notes would be alot better than a screamer. Awesome job!

[Lvshorty610]

I believe you have to go to Control Panel - Sounds - Advanced Volume Controls - Click Options - Click Properties - Check Recording - And select Stereo Mix

^^ My computer doesnt seem to have those options... hmm :confused:

[Drum_and_Bass_Guy89]

and you dont have a record deal?!?

[ShizLLBiZlL]

my fekin god! if u dont break through theres no chance for anyone

hmm jus thinking its good but im not sure if this is a good or bad thing but it reminds me of the sound track to "burn out 2" i know its lame to compare it to that but it jus reminds me of it anyone think the same??

[swedelead]

Awesome job dude, I bow down to your shredding skills. :wave:

[Shady Ultima]

If you get a singer, and he can sing well with the music, you guys will be amazing, because the music is great.

[Cameron_R]

as many of replies of this post that were made, i am ashamed that none of u know that theses are ALL covers, lemme see, circles, A COVER, eugenes trick bag, that is writen by the ONE the only STEVE VAI. theses recordings are played like half the speed they should be, i give the credit that they are played well but the creative value is just simply not there. \

to the dude that recorded this stuff, made ur own music then take credit for it, ill stick around to see what u will post in the future, but dont take credit for stuff that isnt yours especially when it belongs the vituosos that actually did spend the days, the hours to get that **** across the board.

thanku

peace out

cio

[Lvshorty610]

as many of replies of this post that were made, i am ashamed that none of u know that theses are ALL covers, lemme see, circles, A COVER, eugenes trick bag, that is writen by the ONE the only STEVE VAI. theses recordings are played like half the speed they should be, i give the credit that they are played well but the creative value is just simply not there. \

to the dude that recorded this stuff, made ur own music then take credit for it, ill stick around to see what u will post in the future, but dont take credit for stuff that isnt yours especially when it belongs the vituosos that actually did spend the days, the hours to get that **** across the board.

thanku

peace out

cio

Way to not read the first post or the rest of the thread. In the first post, I clearly stated I recommended listening to Falling Darkness (an original song) first. The three songs at the very bottom of the soundclick page are my three originals (Obsession, Adrenaline, and Falling Darkness). Every other song, not once, did I claim for them to be my own.

Not only for each song that I covered did I put a picture representing that artist (the double-guitar for Michael Angelo, the Chromeboy for Satriani, the Peavey guitar for Van Halen, the ESP for Metallica, the Ibanez Jem [Vai Signature] for Vai's material).... not only did I put icons representing that they were cover's, but if you read them at all, they all say "My attempt at insert song title here" or "My cover of insert song title here".

Just glancing on the soundclick page, you can tell I never dared say that material is my own... "This is the entire song Circles by Joe Satriani". I gave Satriani credit for Circles... "My acoustic cover of Joe Satriani - Tears In The Rain": Again, I gave Satriani credit for writing that song.

The bottom three songs of the page with the Soundclick logos on them are completely original and written by me and my band. I NEVER claimed to have written the covers that are on that page, and I don't think anyone who has posted in this thread besides you has thought that I claimed to be taking credit for writing those songs. If I may, I'll go as far as accepting your compliment in saying that they were played well though. You did comment on that alot of it is not up to speed, however, Circles and the Master of Puppets solos are two that are both up to speed... I did play them with a backing track, so they have to be up to speed :thumb:

Falling Darkness, Obsession, and Adrenaline are 100% original songs. Please, take a listen to any or all of these three songs.

[Melanhead]

Soundclick is down.... I'll check later.

[Cameron_R]

yea, i didnt really realize that, sorry for the misunderstanding, it just seemed that people were giving u the credit for the music, im sure u can understand my concern, regardless, it sounded good.

[walchy]

wow. like it

[Lvshorty610]

yea, i didnt really realize that, sorry for the misunderstanding, it just seemed that people were giving u the credit for the music, im sure u can understand my concern, regardless, it sounded good.

Not a problem. Glad we cleared up the misunderstanding.

[metallica fan]

what age are you guys? thats pretty deadly

[-TheGlassPrison-]

jesus... i had to say the lords name in vain.... amazing, simply amazing... you should definatly apply for something of a record deal... im book marking those demos... wowowowowowowowow

[metallica fan]

what age are you guys? thats pretty deadly
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[bassdude2]

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.................... do you guys look at your posts what age are you

[Flaminghotchino]

Even though it's not exactly my favorite genre of music, I loved it, and would most definately purchase an album if you and your bandmates create one in the future. Hopefully, You'll get a good singer, and have some really powerful lyrics to support the powerful music. Goodjob, You've inspired and enlightened me.

[Lvshorty610]

jesus... i had to say the lords name in vain.... amazing, simply amazing... you should definatly apply for something of a record deal... im book marking those demos... wowowowowowowowow

So Jesus is the lord these days? :lol:


what age are you guys? thats pretty deadly
.................... do you guys look at your posts what age are you


16 and 17 years old :thumb:

Even though it's not exactly my favorite genre of music, I loved it, and would most definately purchase an album if you and your bandmates create one in the future. Hopefully, You'll get a good singer, and have some really powerful lyrics to support the powerful music. Goodjob, You've inspired and enlightened me.

Talk about an inspirational speech :lol:. Much appreciated, thanks dude :)

[myheartbleedsnomore]

that was AMAZING. great riffs, and a screamer like as i lay dying or maybe like the used would be sick so keep up the good tunes. It was way chill. Tight compositions as well. ill shut up now.

[King_Karl]

Sorry but i got bored after a few minutes of Falling Darkness. Get the singer in and record.

[Slapping Penguin]

It won't work sob.....

[T0kyoRσs£]

Very well thought out....I'm impressed!

[joecritch]

Well played guys. The triplet beatdowns sound bo. It was a BIT like riff1, riff2, riff3, riff1, riff2 etc, but if you cut out all the repeats, it would be sexy. Unless, you get a singer who gives it some kinda lyrical progression...like a story or something...? Then that would take the focus away from the fact you are repeating yourself so much. But dont get me wrong, this is the best thing i have heard on here by far! Everything is tight and sexy and generally a bit of a beast. It is like FFAF and stuff, but thats cool, especially if you say you are just having fun! Hey i wish I could have fun that well!

Check MY stuff on purevolume.com/loveburger
and purevolume.com/sprokit

Not as tight as your stuff, but i am proud of it.

[EBS77]

Awesome stuff, I would definitely buy a CD if your band recorded one. Keep it up :thumb:

[joecritch]

cheers man, could you do me a favour and write something critical in the thread entitled "listen to these UK bands!"? I am trying to get some feedback to my bandmates, and it would be awesome if i could just link to that one thread. Have you found a singer yet??

Please? thanks dude.

[Lvshorty610]

Chill bro... I'll crit yours, but try not to advertise in other threads :thumb:

[Lvshorty610]

bump for old times sake