i did a new song guys

[Raayl]

http://soundcloud.com/raayl/judge-me-for-i-am-worthy

You’re a ****ing whore and that is all you’ll ever be
So don’t you point your dirty mother ****ing fingers towards me
Call me when you feel like it **** me when you’re threatened by it
I don’t give a **** so just find a way to be quick about it

Your sordid motives are unknown
You ****ed me up and killed my soul
And I won’t ever understand oh no
I’d rather cut my own heart than know
I would rather ****in die alone
Than live in this place you call home
I am not an addict or a whore
I don’t ****ing care anymore

Is this supposed to be where I will bow down
Well sorry to disappoint I don’t know how
Is this supposed to be where I beg to live
Well sorry honey I already put the drugs in
Is this supposed to be your big finish?
Well sorry I am not impressed by weakness.
Is this supposed to be when you kill me
Who knew justice was so ****ing funny

You’re a ****ing whore and that is all you’ll ever be
So don’t you point your dirty mother ****ing fingers towards me
Call me when you feel like it **** me when you’re threatened by it
I don’t give a **** so just find a way to be quick about it

Haunted by the soul I can never find
Shocked to hear as I suddenly realize
I was dead and dying here this whole time
But supposedly alive
This concentration camp is vast
Don’t you ****ing cut in line you are last
I let you rape me in the past
But now your time has come to pass

Is this supposed to be where I will bow down
Well sorry to disappoint I don’t know how
Is this supposed to be where I beg to live
Well sorry honey I already put the drugs in
Is this supposed to be your big finish?
Well sorry I am not impressed by weakness.
Is this supposed to be when you kill me
Who knew justice was so ****ing funny

You know that I do have it worse
You know how many I have hurt
So judge me for I am worthy
So judge me for I am worthy

[funkyhoney]

Ok now this is just terrible, what the **** were you thinking? I can't even understand the words, the beats are repetitive and recycled, just utter **** more or less. What the hell happened, your stuff used to be good.
































































































































By this time I hope you can tell I am being sarcastic and have nothing but good things to say about this track.

Nice work.

[Raayl]

lol whats funny is you're totally right

[funkyhoney]

I know, but it's still good.

[Raayl]

when i was writing this song i actually wanted to set out for it to be more reflective, somber, and positive.

LOL.

[karmapavementplan]

http://soundcloud.com/raayl/judge-me-for-i-am-worthy

You’re a ****ing whore and that is all you’ll ever be
So don’t you point your dirty mother ****ing fingers towards me
Call me when you feel like it **** me when you’re threatened by it
I don’t give a **** so just find a way to be quick about it

Your sordid motives are unknown
You ****ed me up and killed my soul
And I won’t ever understand oh no
I’d rather cut my own heart than know
I would rather ****in die alone
Than live in this place you call home
I am not an addict or a whore
I don’t ****ing care anymore

Is this supposed to be where I will bow down
Well sorry to disappoint I don’t know how
Is this supposed to be where I beg to live
Well sorry honey I already put the drugs in
Is this supposed to be your big finish?
Well sorry I am not impressed by weakness.
Is this supposed to be when you kill me
Who knew justice was so ****ing funny

You’re a ****ing whore and that is all you’ll ever be
So don’t you point your dirty mother ****ing fingers towards me
Call me when you feel like it **** me when you’re threatened by it
I don’t give a **** so just find a way to be quick about it

Haunted by the soul I can never find
Shocked to hear as I suddenly realize
I was dead and dying here this whole time
But supposedly alive
This concentration camp is vast
Don’t you ****ing cut in line you are last
I let you rape me in the past
But now your time has come to pass

Is this supposed to be where I will bow down
Well sorry to disappoint I don’t know how
Is this supposed to be where I beg to live
Well sorry honey I already put the drugs in
Is this supposed to be your big finish?
Well sorry I am not impressed by weakness.
Is this supposed to be when you kill me
Who knew justice was so ****ing funny

You know that I do have it worse
You know how many I have hurt
So judge me for I am worthy
So judge me for I am worthy


Will Smith don't gotta cuss in his raps to sell his records - FACT. You could learn a thing or two from these words of wisdom, Raayl.

[Raayl]

im such a white trash potty mouth piece of ****

[gaslight]

Wasn't it Eminem that said "Will Smith don't gotta cuss in his raps to sell records", and followed it up with "well I do, so **** him and **** you too"?

And I'm pretty sure Eminem has sold more records.

PS Raayl do a rap.

[Raayl]

way ahead of you

http://www.soundclick.com/bands/page_songInfo.cfm?bandID=867699&songID=6970854

[Moon Flavor]

Better than the norm, I really liked the main backing beat. Pretty cool song, except when it busts into the chorus it's cliche as hell in terms of "pause...power chords in very overused progression and rhythm and most likely vocal melody". It made me so sad because the first 1:10 had impressed me so much.

Oh, and I read the lyrics before I heard the song and rofl'd so bad. There's better ways to convey anger and hatred in lyrics than swearing like a little boy. You seriously sound like me when I was in third grade and I realized I could swear without consequence for the first time. You are a toddler having a tantrum because he's not getting what he wants. That's what I got out of this.

But otherwise nice song

[Raayl]

Better than the norm, I really liked the main backing beat. Pretty cool song, except when it busts into the chorus it's cliche as hell in terms of "pause...power chords in very overused progression and rhythm and most likely vocal melody". It made me so sad because the first 1:10 had impressed me so much.

Oh, and I read the lyrics before I heard the song and rofl'd so bad. There's better ways to convey anger and hatred in lyrics than swearing like a little boy. You seriously sound like me when I was in third grade and I realized I could swear without consequence for the first time. You are a toddler having a tantrum because he's not getting what he wants. That's what I got out of this.

But otherwise nice song

who said i'm trying to convey anger and hatred

EDIT: lol jcs i thought about it and you pretty much hit the nail on the head though "a third grader who just found out what profranity is" that is soooo my vibe on the album im doing. childish, immature, ridiculous violence and deviance. kudos on describing it for me so vividly.

[Moon Flavor]

who said i'm trying to convey anger and hatred

EDIT: lol jcs i thought about it and you pretty much hit the nail on the head though "a third grader who just found out what profranity is" that is soooo my vibe on the album im doing. childish, immature, ridiculous violence and deviance. kudos on describing it for me so vividly.

Oh if that's what you were trying to get across that's cool. I just assumed this song was supposed to be more or less serious and failed, much like the Disturbed song "The Sickness" where there's a minute long break of the singer crying about how his mommy hits him and it's 300% dumbslightly confuzzled sea lion loltastic

[Raayl]

Oh if that's what you were trying to get across that's cool. I just assumed this song was supposed to be more or less serious and failed, much like the Disturbed song "The Sickness" where there's a minute long break of the singer crying about how his mommy hits him and it's 300% dumbslightly confuzzled sea lion loltastic

ya man i actually really like the way you described it. hahaha. it almost gives me inspiration to finally write another song that has existed as lyrics in my head for a while.

dolls/toy trucks things like that

its all very disassociative i like to paint characters in songs with nothing but raw, unrestrained, totally ridiculous profanity and sexuality

[karmapavementplan]

Been a while since I've seen a good passive-aggressive argument.

[Mr. Pickle]

Do an acoustic song.

[Raayl]

i have an acoustic guitar and its used on some of the songs from this album that i havnt shown anyone does that count

[Mr. Pickle]

No, Death Cab for Cutie, thx.

[Raayl]

ive done stuff like that before there is stuff like that on this

..i think

maybe not maybe i have no idea what im talking about

[Mr. Pickle]

Just you and an acoustic. That's it. Do it. Now. And no including the words, "love," or "death."

[Raayl]

i can't play and sing i'm not that talented

[Mr. Pickle]

cheat. i dun ker

[Raayl]

are you sure i mean doesnt that ruin the singer songwriter vibe

plus i cant write songs like that i need tons of gadgets and samplers to mask how simplistic and over-used my progressions are

[Mr. Pickle]

don't be a pussy.

or everyone will make fun of you for it.

[karmapavementplan]

Ha Ha, Raayl can't do deathcab tracks.

**** Pickle was right.

[Raayl]

if i cant do deathcabforcutie tracks what can i do

****

[Mr. Pickle]

I encourage Death Cab. Do a cover of that one Death Cab song about feelings and stuff. o wait

[BenJammin]

http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=hMOkfI7wCrI

Cover this, plz.

[Mr. Pickle]

That's a good one, but do the Iron & Wine version:

http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=EKGHkBComjM&feature=related

[Joelbassman]

http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=hMOkfI7wCrI

Cover this, plz.
This.


That's a good one, but do the Iron & Wine version:

http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=EKGHkBComjM&feature=related
Not this. :p

[Mr. Pickle]

gtfo

[Joelbassman]

ily2

[Raayl]

well i didnt do a death cab for cutie song but i definitely just did a really noisy broken ****ed up heavy metal drone at 50 bpm

[Joelbassman]

Isn't that what all your music consists of?








































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jkjk

[Raayl]

no you're right

idk its just what happens i love electronic, glitchy tinged beats with super duper heavy guitars

and then of course i layered the vox in distortion old school ****

http://www.yousendit.com/transfer.php?action=batch_download&batch_id=Y1RyQ1ZoZ1A1aVlLSkE9PQ

wut do u think joel

[Joelbassman]

I shall listen when I get home, at school atm, they use macs, don't think I wanna risk giving them a virus from a dirty old pc.


But srsly I will listen to both your new tracks when I gets to the home.

p.s. it's my birthday today so write me a song. Or just do Happy Birthday EBM style.

[Raayl]

lol maybe i will

[Mr. Pickle]

well i didnt do a death cab for cutie song

Then you also won't be getting any poon tonight.

[Raayl]

pickle you need an avatar buddy wtf is this ****

pick bulma then we can mate

[gaslight]

Why not have a picture of a pickle.

[funkyhoney]

Too cliché.

Have a picture of a mango.

Or better yet, man goo.

[gaslight]

I don't think that would be better at all :lol:.

[funkyhoney]

Don't be so sure, it worked wonders for... uhh... Elton John...?

[gaslight]

Worked wonders for Freddie Mercury.

[Duncster]

Doth beats poclaim thy en GODEN.
i enjoyed the song a lot. it was ****ing sick.
remember that song with the smooth awesome drum lick and you whipped out a jizz-worthy tom roll in the middle of it? you should whip that out more.

[Jaded]

Sounds great except for the kick and snare. they don't mix well with the other percussion, also that beat they play at 7 secs sounds really gay, but when reaches about 43 secs it sounds a lot better with the extra hits you added. I also don't really dig the intro, it's too long and drawn out. It's cool how it builds, but it takes too long. Once the song gets going everything sounds great. You really nailed the NIN thing.

[Raayl]

aww thanks jaded

[Joelbassman]

I kinda agree with Jaded about the acoustic kit on top of the other kits. (if that is what I am hearing). But man those dj scratching type things were real cool. How'd you do it?

Lol btw, I'm working on a track that is as close to your style as I'm ever gonna get. I even do vocals (auto tuned ofc :lol:). So I might hit you up for some advice if I'm happy enough with it.

Think kind of Passenger by Deftones, but not as good, and having an orgy with sci fi industrial musix.

Anyway. Back to your song. Still haven't had a good listen on good speakers/headphones, but I'm getting there :p

[Raayl]

the scratch things are just sample patches from reason. there's like a billion of them i just cut them apart and program them to the bpm of the song and put them in its really easy lol