On Their Eyes

[thetaoshum]

align shoulders and hips
musty anamotronics
can't comprehend
but a clockwork of connected strings makes them
line up tight and stay
a laboratory basement for lustrous structures,
watch watching,
minutemen

turning back on their eyes
their rusted shadows rallying
assembled consciousness
headed single-file toward their end

turned back
on their eyes

[danielrothmann]

Well done thetaoshum!

In particular, I really like
"their rusted shadows rallying
assembled consciousness"

Looking forward to reading more from you :)

[rasputin]

yeah this was really nice

[Urethra Franklin]

real cool, I just wish there was more.