Some lyrics I wrote - for criticism

[TheUnidentifiedMan]

The world is ****ed
****ed right up
Bush is a douche
Cheney is a lamey

Barrack Obama drinks all night
Does cocaine too
Marijuana and hashish
Always sniffing glue

Chorus:
**** THE PRESIDENT
HE'S AN EMBARRASSMENT
HE ****ED YOU UP THE ***
AND THEN ASKED FOR MORE TAX

What do you guys think?
It's sort of a proto funk folk song..I just started it , still need a third verse.

[hancockfan]

Ooooo..........kaaaaaayyyyy.........

[14CAPITALLETTERS]

Cheney is a lamey

[kitsch]

at least figure out how to bypass the swear filter, noob.

and this is probably the most pathetic thing that ive seen posted on this board in a good while.

wait until youre no longer in 8th grade before you write another song with any political connotations whatsoever.

[rasputin]

cheney is a lamey
brilliant

[Mikedrummer]

he ****ed you up the *** then asked for more tax lol

[Jim Colyer]

Well, I have to agree with you.

[Jaundice]

How can it be proto funk when funk already happened?

wait until youre no longer in 8th grade before you write another song with any political connotations whatsoever.I wrote a political song in 6th grade once. lol I think I'mma post it.

Thousands of dollars spent on machines that kill
While thousnads of lives will be lost today
Your head and your money are in Iraq
While hell is breaking out here in America
If you spent half the money
Half the time
Gave half a f**k
About preventing death
injustice
peril
Maybe we could make a difference

Why don't you try to save lives
Instead of trying to take them

We're stuck
In a standstill
This place is going nowhere
But children are hungry
Women are being raped
Drugs are being dealt
And life is at stake
But no one seems to care

Why don't you try to save lives
Instead of trying to take them

So this is your faith based approach
What faith is it based on?
And if you are so pro-life why don't you
Try to save one
lolol

[kitsch]

:lol:

when i was in the sixth grade i wrote songs that were pretty much blink 182 and the sex pistols combined

it was pretty awful

[catharsis]

When I was in the sixth grade I was fat and might as well have been mute.

[Jaundice]

When I was in 6th grade I was fat and really really really should have been mute but instead I insisted on constantly talking and thus letting people realize deeply how much of a jackass i was.