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14CAPITALLETTERS
04-28-2009, 09:19 PM
separately
moved by air
fall here, fall there
to meet
on the ground
in puddles
all around
me
kitsch
04-28-2009, 10:34 PM
hell yes ive been digging short image poetry and writing a few myself.

this one made my day.
14CAPITALLETTERS
04-29-2009, 02:01 AM
nice, short image poem was exactly my aim

ive been reading haikus and matsuo basho

A lonely pond in age-old stillness sleeps . . .
Apart, unstirred by sound or motion . . . till
Suddenly into it a lithe frog leaps.
kitsch
04-29-2009, 03:47 PM
basho is kick *** but my fav japanese poet is probably shiki
Jim Colyer
05-01-2009, 09:00 PM
Nice, but needs to be developed more.