Who Made the Nazis?

[Isaac Butt]

I'll tell ya who made the nazis
All the Os
White-O's
Burnt-O
29 year old
Who made the Nazis?
Ya mind tellin' me?
Who made the Nazis?
Balding smug faggots
Intellectual halfwits
All the O's
Who made the Nazis?
The Nazis are longhorn
Longhorn breed
Longhorn
longhorn breed
Who made the Nazis?
Motels like three split-level mirages
Who made the Nazis?
Buffalo lips on toast, smiling
Who made the Nazis?
I put a finger on the weird
This was real Irish now
Joe was then good as gold
good as gold, and told of the rapists in the Spa Motel.
the real mold
Who made the Nazis?
Benny's cobweb EYES!
Who made the Nazis?
Bad bias TV
BBC, George Orwell, Burmese Days
Who made the Nazis?
Longhorn
Longhorn breed
Longhorns
Longhorn breed
Who made the Nazis
Black burnt flesh
Hark hark
Crack unit species
Who made the Nazis?
All the O's cross country
Who made the Nazis?
Shag-artists
Who made the Nazis?
You mind tellin' me?
Here's a word from Bobby
If you're out of love, just give them real soap
Hate's not your enemy, love's your enemy
Murder all bush monkeys
[Longhorn, longhorn breed]
Who made the Nazis?
Who made the Nazis?
All the O's
Real Irish know, Joe
Who made the Nazis?
Intellectual halfwits
Longhorn
longhorn breed
Longhorn
longhorn breed
Longhorn
longhorn breed
Who made the Nazis?

[mutt]

Maybe I don't get it.

It seems like your going for a rather crass writing style with this piece

Reading this, it's a little rambling and doesn't really develop or take the reader in any particular direction.

It seems to be another brute force method of driving home the point Nazis = Bad.

Now that I think about it, I like the question you pose. But the rambling answers don't do much for me.

All crit's aside, i'd probably dig the tune if it was executed well.

[catharsis]

I'm all for pieces with obfuscated meaning, but it seems like you're aiming for that effect and also the effect of getting a specific idea across. Thematically, I like it. But the meaning in it is disjointed.

[mazurov]

Hmmm, I'm not really getting the meaning of this song....

For example:
"Who made the Nazis?
Bad bias TV
BBC, George Orwell, Burmese Days"

Are you trying to say that the BBC, George Orwell, etc... created the Nazis.. or the concept of racial purity... or what?

There's obviously a message in here somewhere, but it's far too unclear to the reader. I'm sure it makes sense in your head...