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wartomods
04-22-2009, 03:59 PM
and one more comes
with nowhere to go,
leaving the place
we all hate and
we all know,
home

cyanidebreathmint01
04-22-2009, 10:15 PM
Pretty short bro... maybe another verse?
Try some nifty imagery... why you leavin home?
Is it cold out there all alone?
I want to feeeel it.

kitsch
04-29-2009, 03:58 PM
written from homeless shelter perhaps?
or more metaphorical?
either way i dig it

whats the significance of the title?