I Am God

[14CAPITALLETTERS]

I am, it is true, I am God.
I took my tea each morning
By the primordial ocean.
And let me tell you,
This ordeal I set in motion,
All of this commotion,
Is just the swelling of tomatoes,
The dancing of the fly,
The wilting of the rose,
And the river running dry.
So take it easy on yourself,
Stop your wondering why,
Put your pride on the shelf
And it'll be easier to die.

[Seafroggys]

Kinda hard to take seriously with the tomatoes comment

[14CAPITALLETTERS]

why?

[Seafroggys]

Seems rather comedic....when I read swelling tomatoes I just chuckled, it makes this appear to be a comedy piece. Why I am assuming it's not.

[14CAPITALLETTERS]

haha

[Jim]

i didn't mind the tomatoes

[catharsis]

Nor did I. I liked it. It's lighthearted, but not. Well executed.

[lindy]

Very nice flow, it does come off as comedy although I have no problems with that. Great work.

[kitsch]

this is great