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Aflong Aflongkong
12-08-2008, 07:59 AM
i watched a man make cotton candy
apparently out of thin air at the circus.
there was a spinning wheel
and he poured in a bag of sugar
and then pieces of pink fluff came off the sides,
combing into pink clouds billowing
and finally he stuck a cardboard stick in
and handed me a pink wobbling hugeness.
it wasn't the taste, though i smudged mouth
and cheeks to get every last bit.
it was the process i never forgot.
when they told me at sunday school
god created the world out of nothing
i knew just how he did it.

kitsch
12-08-2008, 10:13 AM
i fukin hate cotton candy
i used to have a job at the fair
that stuff will stick to you when you sweat
gets in ur hair and shi

nice job romanticizing it tho

rohbit
12-08-2008, 03:34 PM
That was pretty damn cool.

Though I have to admit I laughed at:

"And handed me a pink wobbling hugeness"

Aflong Aflongkong
12-09-2008, 06:01 PM
pink wobbling hugeness is a funny sounding mix of words

danbrady
12-17-2008, 03:51 PM
this is very cool, like candy floss, we call it in scotland, short and sweet.
enjoyed.
dan