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itachi1452
12-07-2008, 09:29 PM
My nightmare
Is here so fast
Watching me
Haunting me
Reaping now
Preaching souls of
Deceptive past

Shades spread deep as reason grows
Shadows climb as blood runs gold
Daylight screams through the piercing night
Time grows old when young ones die

Darkness binds
Beauty lies
Still as sand
Lost in control
Time flies bye
Ages die
Finally

Shades spread deep as reason grows
Shadows climb as blood runs gold
Daylight screams through the piercing night
Time grows old when young ones die

The silence of the hollow has yet to arrive
Armageddon hangs still by its only thread
The day of reckoning has come so soon,
Judgment can wait, for silence consumes

Shades spread deep as reason grows
Shadows climb as blood runs gold
Daylight screams through the piercing night
Time grows old when young ones die

sho0oo
12-08-2008, 03:30 AM
very cool the chorus has an awesome haunting effect.

Dr_Tuesday
12-18-2008, 03:13 PM
Very nice. The simplicity of the first two verses adds much to the chorus, giving it more emotion and demanding more attention. Very enjoyable.

Pastor of Muppets
12-19-2008, 01:36 AM
I like the words you use. It's possible to convey complex or intimate ideas without using obscure vocab or 5 syllable words. Good job!