random quick song i wrote at work.

[schiggy]

There she goes
Down somewhere else to where
no one knows
And as days go by
You'll wonder why she'll try
And it shows.
It shows the way she'll look at me
And I'll look at her for the first.
From the first time we met
And the last into the past
Till today
It was the way we were
Untill we die

[bard2dbone]

I don't want to sound mean. But where are you planning to take this?

It just feels like a first draft of a first verse.

Please take a look at Barefoot Cinderella for me.