New song, tweaked an older one slightly

[karmapavementplan]

so yeah, I changed the drums slightly on celestial feedback, and posted up a new one called 'dead end ponderings' named so because it just reached a dead end and I couldn't think of where to go with the track, so any ideas on that would be nice.

So yeah, any pointers or opinions would be appreciated.

EDIT: forgot to post link - www.myspace.com/hypnamusic

[Magnus55]

A link would be good.

[karmapavementplan]

thst's a good point - www.myspace.com/hypnamusic

[huxtaposition]

Alright, well, here's a proper link:

http://www.myspace.com/hypnamusic

You posted two oddly wrong links.

Dead End Pondering. It was just everywhere. It seemed almost frantic. You were jumping around with a lot of different ideas it seemed, and a lot of it did not keep my interest, but what you started doing at 1:24 I really liked, and you kept with it for a little bit, but then moved on to something else. Towards the end of the song you were doing more great stuff, but it would only last a couple of seconds and cut short. I'd say keep practicing with Reason 3 too.

I still enjoy Celestial Feedback, but more of what I said. Parts I like and parts I don't, but that's just me. :chug:

[karmapavementplan]

cheers for the advice, old bean