Please tell me what you think of this singing attempt

[Mikedrummer]

http://uk.youtube.com/watch?v=L_tMeXvmjJA

Hey all... Please tell me your opinion on this, what I should try to improve, work on, etc.. I know i've whored a couple of videos this week but, meh.

I also forgot about the big **** up near the end when i uploaded it. i could re-do it, but for now just ignore it.

[Mikedrummer]

up :p

[radtaste]

Sounded alright to my semi-trained/working ears.

[Magnus55]

It's out of tune, especially the low notes. The high note "CHeeest" is flat. When you sing harmonies with yourself, you should be able to "feel" when you hit the exact same note. It'll vibrate at the same speed and you'll hear a... surround sound type of effect. It's hard to explain but when you do it you'll feel it.

[Mikedrummer]

allright man, i'll take that into account.

[peaveyrules]

Its not bad at all, the first thing I noticed is you have to hold out your ending syllables so they don't trail or drop off...because when you don't hold the notes value out for what its originally intended for, it's a lot easier to go out of tune and sound nasty. I think with a little more practice you'll be just fine.

[Mikedrummer]

i see what you mean man, ill take that into account too.