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huxtaposition
11-08-2008, 09:40 AM
I wrote "Nodding" throughout this week. It's a short rough draft right now, but I wanted some feedback on it before I maybe take it in a silly direction or become too meticulous and ruin it.

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Comments appreciated. :smash:

Magnus55
11-14-2008, 07:00 PM
Nodding- You're not singing you're... talking. The music is nice, I just couldn't get past the "vocals". The other songs with no vocals are good too they have interesting musical content. A little too much reverb in some spots for my taste, but maybe that's just me.

huxtaposition
11-14-2008, 09:17 PM
I do go a little wild with the reverb, like I think it can hide the poor quality of my equipment/ability, but I also genuinely like the effect.

I'm also not gung-ho about my "vocals." I just figured adding lyrics could help people relate to my mostly instrumental tracks. Definitely something to work on.

Thanks for the input!