Please Critique this vocal cover!

[Mikedrummer]

I've been learning to sing over the past few weeks

this is the first proper attempt at recording a cover

www.myspace.com/onandonuk

i know it needs a lot of work, i'd love to hear opinions anyway

[Mikedrummer]

bump

[Magnus55]

It's nasally, and pitchy. The good news is at least you can hear pitch so there's room for improvement. When you sing a note be sure to follow it through before switching to the next note, otherwise you'll end up going flat before the note is finished.

[fruteefly]

It's nasally, and pitchy. The good news is at least you can hear pitch so there's room for improvement. When you sing a note be sure to follow it through before switching to the next note, otherwise you'll end up going flat before the note is finished.

this exactly.

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