I have a review

[beans]

I just got done writing and i would really like some feedback on it.
If you can give me some honest constructive criticism and give some pointers on how to get better at writing then that would be awesome.
Anyone interested just drop your email address.

[Iluvatar]

if this is a clever ruse to get my email so you can send naked pictures of yourself to me nay!

[beans]

lol it really isnt man
since you're a staff writer can you take a look at it and let me know how you think it reads?

[beans]

nvm i already posted it just check it out

[morrissey]

People can post their comments/critiques over at sputnik