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BassAddict04
08-24-2008, 04:55 PM
hey everyone.
check out the new track if you have time and let me know what you think.
I appreciate all that have been supporting me throughout and giving my tracks a listen once in a while, thank you.

http://www.myspace.com/citizenpolak

Phalanx
08-24-2008, 05:16 PM
It's pretty groovy, but it just doesn't seem to go anywhere.

You get that synth break in the middle and you're thinking "ooo la la, I wonder what'll happen now" and then it's just the same exact thing as the beginning.

BassAddict04
08-24-2008, 06:06 PM
It's pretty groovy, but it just doesn't seem to go anywhere.

You get that synth break in the middle and you're thinking "ooo la la, I wonder what'll happen now" and then it's just the same exact thing as the beginning.

youre right.
but at the same time, it felt like this song needed to be the way it was you know what im saying? its the last song of the album, im sick of my music. Break

Raayl
08-24-2008, 07:00 PM
dude, your song titles suggest an IQ less than 40

BassAddict04
08-25-2008, 12:35 AM
dude, your song titles suggest an IQ less than 40

shut up famous internet man.

enjoy the tune and shut the **** up for once. vampire boy ( i brought it back )
:chug:

Raayl
08-25-2008, 01:01 AM
shut up famous internet man.

enjoy the tune and shut the **** up for once. vampire boy ( i brought it back )
:chug:

nah, not even gonna listen to it. you're way too dumb on this one.

BassAddict04
08-25-2008, 01:09 AM
nah, not even gonna listen to it. you're way too dumb on this one.

:chug: