Anyone care to rate a new song?

[Switchay]

http://media.putfile.com/Earl-Bellinger---Song-of-Sorrow

Created on Guitar Pro 5, so the singing is being played by a MIDI keyboard. You should be able to recognize where that part is, it sounds like a really breathy voice.

I wrote this song yesterday after "quitting songwriting" for a little over a month.

[emilyy]

0/10

[Switchay]

Thanks for the constructive criticism

[dei]

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