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72haha72
06-10-2008, 02:20 AM
"Withdrawal”



The portrait of this place makes me sick

No one will ever get what they long for

And no one will ever get rid of the callousness

Communication is lost, the feelings withdraw

Their voices sound like white noise

Everyone’s face is a fair reason to faint



How reasonable??

Just about how reasonable??



Miserable decorations on a long broken clock

With a needle and some rage I break the lock

Cadaverous image of my long dead ambition

The abyss is close, here comes my ignition



Everyday this pungee pit experience

The taste of old nickel

But I don´t

I don´t think so

As long as the window stays where it is



They’ve asked me about embers

But the truth is it rains

Why not feel a little blue?

Why not fear the attic?

The cracks of the ceiling remind me

Of that lonely place where pain is palpable



We don’t like the way freedom tastes

But inside everything’s Socorro please

Everyday this pungee pit experience

The taste of old nickel

But I don´t

I don´t think so

As long as the window stays where it is


Bloody future

Our time is done with the stitches

Bloody home

Maybe it’s not to late to hit and run



How reasonable??

Just about how ****ing reasonable?!?!

Is there a little bit of intelligence left??

Is there someone clever enough???

Is there at least one ounce of grey matter here???

HELL ****ING NO!



You wanted reasonable I’ll show you reasonable

Statutory Ape
06-29-2008, 09:33 AM
Sans the last stanza that's a really great song/poem.

Sun Ray™
06-29-2008, 09:38 AM
How reasonable??

Just about how ****ing reasonable?!?!

Is there a little bit of intelligence left??

Is there someone clever enough???

Is there at least one ounce of grey matter here???

HELL ****ING NO!


This part is unnessessary, to me. The rest of it is great.