if this is being human, then i want out

[dinosaurxbrocore]

okay, so today i was thinking,
what's even the point to any of this?
we see a life in which only I have the right to breathe,
but we don't see the suffering we bring,
we live based upon mock-philosphy,
that christian ethic was great back-in-the-day,
but it ain't so much anymore,
"if there's a god then why do they suffer?"
because maybe you're all blind pieces of ****?

it's so ironic to see as how
we're named for ideals that we have lost

and we're born impoverished
in stably structured homes
to parents with expensive clothes and fancy cars
and our only battle is condemnation
to make sure we hate those who differ

this is the cross we're born to suffer
societal collapse was past due anyhow

and so i'm praying
for humanity to return to humankind
and so i suffer
because our ideals are a ****ing farce

there's no god! there's no god!
i swear that there is no god!
i have undeniable proof!
we evolved from apes, yeah man that proves it
if you think otherwise you're a ****ing idiot
because disbelief will make you ****ing smart

[1338 h4x0r]

bree bree

[Surf]

only battle is condemnation

societal collapse was past due anyhow

for humanity to return to humankind

These three lines sound awkward: they don't really fit the kind of narrative voice.

I don't really like it (lack of imagery/metaphor/yadda yadda gay crap), but yeah, just thought those lines stuck out a bit, especially the third one. It sounds a bit cheesy anyway, but I like the invocation so you could try and think of an alternative way of saying it.

[dinosaurxbrocore]

i agree completely but like, at least i have the main idea outlined!