Elle a eu le sourire d’étés avec la peau d’hivers(I'm soo not a frenchman)

[PatchworkNeurology]

Eyes like a beautiful grassland
and a presence thats calming like the seabrease
What did ya think when pianos played the greating song?
And the penatonic riffing just hummed right along
And nothing so casual ever seemd so fluently grasped
And repeatition never felt so.....
No more begging to go cold....

[Gone2Far]

You don't have to use "été" and "hiver" on their plural form. Remove the "s".

Also, I think the sentence "Elle a un sourire d'été et une peau d'hiver" would be better. "un" means "a", and "le" means "the", that's why.

For the poem, I simply love it!

[TojesDolan]

And the penatonic riffing just hummed right along

That was a bit lame. :p

Play around with different vocabulary to say the same, minus the technical vocabulary.

EDIT: Otherwise I liked it!