Yeah, i'll post the poopty babelfish translation titles on another one.

[PatchworkNeurology]

I'm new to this fourm but have been writing for a while,
Yes my grammar can be poor and so can my spelling,
but deal with it.
Anyways, onto the point:

"Juste foutu cassez vers le haut avec lui !"

It's running through the dark medow
The trees glairing down they've caught wind
As the moonlight sheads a doubt upon the scene
This simple minded creature of human emotion and nature
Peered into the water to see a reflection
Of something he/she had yet to ever see
The burning reflection gauzing back to see
Doubtful reasonings to short-commings
and the simple end it would bring about
The chilling whistle the wind did blow
The dark night sky like a cover to cover all
A facade over the obivious
A truth to cover up the truth
As the winged ones formed the choir to
Caww a instilling chorus
Our compass lost it's sence of direction
No messages to get a stedier setting
Waiting and treading in the ankle deep water
Wake up, stop swimming!
You stand in ankle deep water.

[\m/-CHeV-\m/]

It's running through the dark medow
The trees glaring down they've caught wind
As the moonlight sheds a doubt upon the scene
This simple minded creature of human emotion and nature
Peered into the water to see a reflection
Of something he/she had yet to ever see
The burning reflection gazing back to see
Doubtful reasonings to short-comings
and the simple end it would bring about
The chilling whistle the wind did blow
The dark night sky like a cover to cover all
A facade over the oblivious/obvious?
A truth to cover up the truth
As the winged ones formed the choir to
Caww a instilling chorus
Our compass lost it's sence of direction
No messages to get a more steady setting
Waiting and treading in the ankle deep water
Wake up, stop swimming!
You are standing in ankle deep water

just a few corrections ;). i liked it, although i didn't really know exactly what it was about. mind explaining it?

[PatchworkNeurology]

Well the basic thought was some sort of self-realization.
We all put on a facade over our bullshit, but sooner or
later we'll come face to face with what needs to be done
or what needs adjustments.

Seeing all the things you don't want to see when you look
into that reflection: growing up, steady job, relationship problems, whatever problems...

Thanks for corrections though, I appriciate it and I hope
I answered your question for you.

[\m/-CHeV-\m/]

yeha man, that's good man. I like how i know really understand what you mean with what you wrote. also i liek the fact it isn't that easy to understadn at first. I've really got nothign to say anything bad about, except for the 'ankle deep water' part. sound a bit weak. but the rest is great man :). I'd so use this in one of our bands songs :D

[PatchworkNeurology]

Thanks, yeah the ankle deep water part is kinda ehh.
I was just so stoked about how the beginning and middle came out, the ending was just a tad bit rough on me.

Ha I use to be a vocalist for my band and thats why I write so much, but now i'm going to school for writing so I can make some money off of something I enjoy doing.

Thanks a lot once again!