Listen Closely, This Telegram Is Marked Urgent

[ITRIEDVOODOOONCE]

Ive broken walls and codes
and rhyme and flows
and barriers but no,
this is no longer a trial of
traits and standards
This was once a recession
But i believe this is the trough
So sing the praises!

All our prized gemstones are now
easily corroded by the touch of a pauper
replacing innocence with
dicks upon dicks upon dicks
We are preaching to pagans
but they needed a field day






am i back? meh who knows

[factor46]

interesting, for sure.

the beginning reminded me a little too much of eminem haha.

however i liked how you ended it.


and i like the title. made me smirk.
is it even possible to mark a telegram?


:thumb:

[tonybrown]

it is indeed possible..........decent title multiple implications

and nice flow too