New Song - check it out

[tomsawyerdeath]

Rate this song based on the guitars, vocals, songwriting, drums and mix. drums are sequenced. also comment on the genre and which band does it sound like.

http://media.putfile.com/Something-to-live-for-something-to-die-for

[Shred Danson]

Now you've got something to live for something to die for!

[tomsawyerdeath]

Now you've got something to live for something to die for!

what :confused:

[Mekkalayakay]

It's like if Bob Dylan started a prog-based dream pop band with black-power metal influences and dark atmospheres

[dinosaurxbrocore]

needs to be more like the linden murder

but this is alright, should go instrumental though

[tomsawyerdeath]

what do you think about the vocals?

[Shred Danson]

what :confused:

you know, that one song

[tomsawyerdeath]

lamb of god?

[Trim vs. the System]

First impression not a fan of the tone of the guitars as well. Also the drum sounds are horrible but i have an imagination so i that ain't a problem. Vox sound a little weak to me. Occasional problems with pitching as well. Interesting solo. That's genuinely inventive and original. I can tell this song has been well written. So far the only thing spoiling it are the tones and the drum machine. I reckon this'd be a very very good song indeed if you guys got a better producer. And a drummer. lol. Wasn't expecting the throat at the end either. A nice surprise which added to the atmosphere and was surprisingly not out of place. Work on that pitching on the vox as well. That comes with confidence and a bit of power. Unless that is specifically the feel you were going for.
Overall a good song that was let down by slightly shoddy production. There's a gem under there though.

Any return crit appreciated.
http://www.sputnikmusic.com/forums/showthread.php?t=556947