weird song i wrote

[Aguywithaguitar]

i wrote it like two days ago and i cant really tell how it turned out just because the song is weird to me. anybody have any opinions on it?

http://download.yousendit.com/B2DBAD833666CB8A

[einzweiveirfunf]

Really like the intro. The bass and the guitar go together really well, and the drums sound great. Almost like a raw ambient song so far. Really really tight which i like. Like the sound which comes in on the keyboard later a lot. Ending is maybe a little abrubt, though that kinda fits in with the rest of the song.

Anyways, it may not be the most conventional peice of music i've ever heard (which i like) but it aint that wierd either. Overall, a good, interesting well put together peice of music

If you ever wanna check out the new song i recorded:

http://www.sputnikmusic.com/forums/showthread.php?t=555458