Weird lyrics.

[H4T3BR33D3R]

Hey folks!

This is my first thread here, so I thought I'd post some lyrics that I wrote for this Stoner Rock band I used to be in. The lyrics were inspired by a wild night of debauchery that I took part in. Hopefully you don't gag too much! :p

Jaded

by Justice Blind.

Hollow eyes, look to the skies.
A self-inflicted daze.
Shallow minds, abroad tonight.
A deep blue, purple haze.

Sanity denied.

Hatred, clouds our fragile minds.
She laughs and calls us love.
Nobody will hear her cries.
A hale from up above.

Sanity deprived.

Senses lost, wasted hope.
Hanging from the thread of a rope.
My hollow eyes are looking to the sky.
My sanity denied.

Humanity despised.


Thanks!

:chug:

[reverendRuff]

hmm man you tried to hard, i do the same thing. Be less like Kurt Cobain and youll prosper

[empirenightmare]

hmm man you tried to hard, i do the same thing. Be less like Kurt Cobain and youll prosper

I don't see anything like Kurt Cobain in here. Judging by his name, he is a fan of Children of Bodom. Which is aweosme, because they rock.

However, I agree that it seems like you tried too hard. I actualy couldnt tell this was about "a wild night of debauchery." It seems to me more like you hate the state of humanity.

There is some good stuff in there though, just to me atleast the message is unclear. But maybe blatenly stating what you did that night ISNT the best line of action lol. Keep up the good work.