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Spades
04-20-2008, 12:19 AM
hey how's it goin?

I just completed a song of mine called "Honey". Feel free to check it out here if you want:
http://www.myspace.com/jspadesmusic

Cheers!

blackmajik2021
04-27-2008, 03:15 PM
thats good, i feel like its from an epic fight scene in an action movie haha. Im a fan of the drums. it sounds very finished, and although i cant hear the vocals i think it adds.

mjollner
04-27-2008, 07:21 PM
All I got was moon river. :(
Good job with making it your own though. =)

Spades
04-29-2008, 02:22 AM
Thanks guys!

Do you find that the vocals are too low in the mix?

Tyrannicide
04-29-2008, 09:34 AM
Nice, I liked it, well done.

But yes, I found the vocals were a bit to low at some points, I can hear what is being sung, but upping the volume on them a little bit to make them a bit more prominent. Just ever so slightly imo.

einzweiveirfunf
04-29-2008, 10:29 AM
Moon River

Great vocals, go really well with the accoustic guitar. Loud in the mix, but it sounds good that way, 'cause your vocals are really clear. The instrumental section is really well put together. I think the volume should maybe go up a bit in the instrumental break bit. Hey, high pitch vocals sound really good

Honey

Like the sound of the drums at the begging. Great instrumental and good vocals. A real change from the last song. Sounds a bit like porcupine tree maybe? Really good song so far. Vocals aren't that low in the mix. Ahh really cool guitars. Not too overly complex just sound really cool. It doesn't really flow into the next bit, but i kinda find that quite interesting. The keyboard effects in the chorus are really effective.

Anyways, i'm afraid i don't quite have the time at the mo to listen to all your stuff but really cool. I can see it reflects your good taste in music (looking at your influences lol :))