Got our song back from the label, tell me what you think!

[jasonresno]

http://www.myspace.com/jpnr08

Checkitout!

Feedback. Crit for Crit!

[Floor_13]

Alrighty here we go:

Leverage: I like the mood the guitar tone and melody creates in the beginning, very mysterious and forboding. The vocals fit nicely, a good flow. I didn't expect the distorted guitars and heavier riff, which reminded me a lot of Linkin Park Mike. Verse again, effects on the vocals. I like that you put a small break between the second verse and chorus, makes the transition smoother. The first transition from verse to chorus seemed a bit bumpy. The singing vocals during the chorus also don't belong, it feels like he just doesn't know when to stop singing and just kept doing the same thing in the chorus. Keep the faster vocals, lose the singing during the chorus. There isn't a lot of variation in the singing, maybe he could use a bit more range to add more flair? The end with the dude talking is cool, the music helps with the flow. The breakdown in the outro is nice, you should go with something like that more.

Overall its not bad, just a few things with the singer mainly.

http://www.sputnikmusic.com/forums/showthread.php?t=555119

If you could check out and critique a song of mine I would mucho happy

[jasonresno]

Dude thanks so much for the input! I'll check your stuff out now!

[jasonresno]

Bump?

[Iscariot]

your singer can shout but he can't sing at least not very well

everything else was cool

maybe my ears are just playing tricks on me but something about the drums was weird though it seemed like during the verses there were off-tempo moments and it didn't just happen once it's like he slows down and then picks it back up again before it becomes really noticeable

[einzweiveirfunf]

Crit as listening

Cool guitar riff at the begging. Very atmospheric, almost sounds a little like tool (melodically)? The vocals are pretty cool, they sound good when shouted. Builds up to the chorus very well, nice full sound on the guitars. The fast vocals over the slower guitars has a nice effect. Yeah that's it, your guitar riff sounds vaguelly similar to the bass riff in schism.

Anyways, good song. If you ever wanna give my stuff a spin:

http://www.sputnikmusic.com/forums/showthread.php?t=555458

[jasonresno]

We dig Tool so that's a compliment. Thanks for checkin out the track! Anyone else?