View Full Version : Symbiotic 3. new song, new approach.
Raayl
04-09-2008, 10:17 PM
this one has been in the works for about a month, and I just finished up all the sample work earlier today. there's no synth, just orchestral sounds, bass, and voice samples. check it out.
Oh, and by the way-Myspace completely owned this mp3. Compressed the hell out of it.
http://www.myspace.com/raayl
Deconstruct Internally
All that remains of me
As the horizon speaks
The sky begins to bleed
It’s blood it spawns redemption
Across eternity
Unleashed in spite of tension
Hope has broken free
No more in isolation
I’ve found what I seek
In the heart of insurrection
My pain begins to leave
Corrode the hope of
Vivified regeneration
Dissolve the fear of
Vivified incineration
Unleash the year of
Vivified rejuvenation
Rebirth their souls from
Ageless cycles of damnation
I know they’re only human
Twisted in endless rage
And even though they killed me
I will set aside my blades
After all we’re only human
So prone to make mistakes
We’re merely flesh and bone
The fragile minions of fate
So if you spill their blood
And visit them beyond the grave
Realize you’ve had enough
As your blood is exactly the same.
Corrode the hope of
Vivified regeneration
Dissolve the fear of
Vivified incineration
Unleash the year of
Vivified rejuvenation
Rebirth their souls from
Ageless cycles of damnation
DaveSavesTheDay
04-09-2008, 10:23 PM
I like the no synth approach.
I'm also a sucker for your intros. I like this one; it's certainly very different from your other ones.
I really like the voice samples, too.
Spaceman Spiff
04-09-2008, 10:58 PM
I really liked this one. I'm digging how you're using a cleaner sound on your vocals, it's a nice change, good to hear you doing something different.
Only beef was the samples seemed to drag on a bit... or something did. Something about the song had something that felt like it went on a bit too long.
This is just first listen. I'll listen again tomorrow.
irishslappop
04-10-2008, 02:35 AM
vocals we're good. You changed the style a bit but still left a good chunk of the original style in there, which was refreshing without a total 180 or complete change. I still want more bass. maybe a distored one or light distortion and a synth would be crazy.
Akira
04-10-2008, 03:17 PM
I'm not going to lie, I don't love this. The instrumentals are repetitive to the point of being boring. The lyrics are nice, but your signature vocal style sort of kills the pretty beat.
Nice to see a new style though.
BenJammin
04-10-2008, 03:19 PM
FWIW Rabi, you say the repetitive/boring thing about a lot of stuff. :p My music, Sade's, Radiohead, anything over 10 minutes long. ;)
:amaze:
04-10-2008, 03:30 PM
eh, sounds like a collab between you and naut, but slower.
:amaze:
Raayl
04-10-2008, 03:36 PM
eh, sounds like a collab between you and naut, but slower.
:amaze:
Nice ear with that connection. naut has been pretty much all of what I've been listening to lately, and I wanted to emulate his sample-driven style with my own little signatures thrown in. I was listening to By Any Means along-side doing the sample work, so that's cool that you can draw the influence.
Akira
04-10-2008, 03:43 PM
FWIW Rabi, you say the repetitive/boring thing about a lot of stuff. :p My music, Sade's, Radiohead, anything over 10 minutes long. ;)
>.<
Well this is rap, so it's a beat, so it really is repetitive. It just could have been... better.
And I stand b my opinion on most of your music and Radiohead's music.
Raayl
04-10-2008, 04:11 PM
>.<
Well this is rap, so it's a beat, so it really is repetitive. It just could have been... better.
And I stand b my opinion on most of your music and Radiohead's music.
this is not rap.
BenJammin
04-10-2008, 06:13 PM
>.<
Well this is rap, so it's a beat, so it really is repetitive. It just could have been... better.
And I stand b my opinion on most of your music and Radiohead's music.
As long as you remember that's all it is: an opinion.
There are plenty of people who would/do disagree with you on both counts. :)
Duncster
04-11-2008, 05:09 PM
Cool song. Love the drum fill at 3:05. Very slick.
Raayl
04-11-2008, 08:09 PM
Cool song. Love the drum fill at 3:05. Very slick.
ty ty. check out the other song if you have time as well, I uploaded a new one today.
Duncster
04-13-2008, 03:56 PM
After listening to this a few more times its become one of my fav of yours (for the time being anyway). Somehow kind of reminds me of Malignant Hero. Solid groove throughout, simple song overall. I like this a lot better though. Definitely your best drum programming in my oppinion. They have a kind of "swingy" feel to em'. Very professional sounding, considering your setup of course, and it doesnt get boring. And the drumfill is mint. Must be very hard to program **** like that with dynamics on the snare.
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