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Liebensaft
04-09-2008, 10:05 PM
Alright, the lyrics and songwriting forum is really slow and no one is ever very helpful, so I'll ask people I'm familiar with for some real feedback. This one's called "Let the Good Times Roll." Thanks in advance.



The meaning of life
Half a keg of the best ale
A night like this can never fail
With booze and me friends all by me side
this nights antics shall ne'er die
:chug:
Oi down by the bar with glass of gin
we are an army that will always win
Drinkin down till we upchuck
tonights liquor in my cup
:chug:
Pile in the car plasterd by gin
havin a good time that will never end
pick up a few gals to finish the night
this is the way to live me life right
:chug:
We drive down the road goin a full speed
then we get wrapped round a old oak tree
I flew 30 feet out of the car because I didn't buckle my seatbelt
Oi Oi Oi! Up The Punx!!!!

Scuba_Steve
04-09-2008, 10:08 PM
GUINNESS BOYS WE ARE HERE WHOAAA OOOHHH, WHOAAA OOOHHH
GUINNESS BOYS WE ARE HERE WHOAAA OOOHHH, WHOAAA OOOHHH
GUINNESS BOYS WE ARE HERE WHOAAA OOOHHH, WHOAAA OOOHHH

Sounds like a song by The Business


Minus the twist at the end.



Actually, their song "Drinking and Driving" has that covered pretty well.

me likes punk
04-09-2008, 10:52 PM
The last verse sounds like a bad PSA.

Kurious Oranj
04-10-2008, 12:12 AM
I smiled

TBrown87
04-10-2008, 06:06 AM
Its my lyrics he just stole them like the f'aggot he is.

TBrown87
04-10-2008, 10:31 AM
:naughty:I love you sanjur0!!!!:naughty:

TBrown87
04-10-2008, 11:53 AM
I intended the song as a joke, man.

Liebensaft
04-10-2008, 01:10 PM
So...you guys like the song? Thanks. I knew I could count on you. :)

nitzguy
04-10-2008, 02:49 PM
lets stop with the hate