New Ambient/Noisecore Song

[Aaron]

Yo. Got a rough draft of a song I'm working on. Based on a sample some might be able to pick. It's not done, but would love feedback on it:

http://media.putfile.com/Ursus-Bitches

[Aaron]

Any feedback?

[badtaste]

Oh, hullo there, I shall listen now.

I like the ambience of it all, but I wish the percussion was more in line with the rest of the music (I'm assuming that's the noisecore aspect...).

[Aaron]

Jar. I wanted juxtaposition between the beats and the more melodic bits.