"Bottom Of A Bottle"

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Court is in session, a verdict is pending
I'm learning my lesson as my broken heart is mending
You're standing by the jury pleading your case
Looking so innocent with that guilty look on your face
We all know you did it it's just a matter of words
So come on, admit it, I know what I heard
ILYUI is a serious offense
A criminal offense, I love you under the influence
You said it to me once again

Whenever you say those three words, it should be the most important moment of your life
How can you tell me that you didn't mean it, when it felt so right?
Now my mind is pacing, my heart is racing faster than full-throttle
Next time you say "I love you" say it from the bottom of your heart, not just the bottom of a bottle

A verdict is in
And your sentence is to spend the rest of your life in love with me again
But I'll be long gone
I'd have done moved on
Even though I said forever
But I didn't lie
Just did to you as you did to I
When you said we'd always be together

Whenever you say those four words, it should be the most important moment of your life
How can you tell me that you didn't mean it, when it felt so right?
Now my mind is pacing, my heart is racing faster than full-throttle
Next time you say "I love you" say it from the bottom of your heart, not just the bottom of a bottle

You forget when it's convenient
Even when you really mean it
But I just can't move on
So I'll keep on holding on

And next time you say "I love you", it should be the most important moment of your life
How can you tell me that you didn't mean it, when it felt so right?
Now my mind is pacing, my heart is racing faster than full-throttle
Next time you say "I love you" say it from the bottom of your heart, not just the bottom of a bottle

[Seafroggys]

A lot of the lines seemed really long, especially with the pace you established in the first stanza. As I read the first stanza I established a flow/rhythm in my head as I was reading it, but once the lines got long it screwed it all up.