Nineteen

[i am the robots]

How does this look to you in all honesty?
Why do we even dance anymore?

Is it for some nostalgia,
Where everybody seems so ****ing
Changed from who and where they were?
And when you scratch the surface,
You find that little girl...
You used to call her Jesus Christ.

You told her that she saved you.
Oh God why won't she save you?

It's ironic: the helpless are helping
The dishonest find success.

[i am the robots]

I might have ripped off Orchid a little in there. :x

[DanGoop]

Very good, I like how you use your religion and love of Christ in your lyrics like Dave Mustaine did on the 2007 Megadeths United Abominations album. Try adding something like Back when I was just 19, I thought I knew everyteen, thought I could make it in the scene. Keep up the good work.

[i am the robots]

Come on Tronn, what the ****.

[TojesDolan]

nostalgia sounds to me like wouldn't fit in a musical environment, and particularly in the place it is in the line (end of it). It doesn't seem like a culminating work, I don't know. I don't like to curse in my pieces, and your use of it was rather common and unsophisticated. Yeh.

Last mini-stanza is cool. Thematically it's boring but it could have hidden meanings I'm not too spiky at the moment to grasp.

Cute.

[i am the robots]

its going to be recorded soon so youll see how it fits okay thanks :)