bicycles of love

[Raelene BundyGal42]

bicycles of love

come riding in the bush with me
on our bicycles of love
two wheels, two minds, two hearts
in union, forever rotating

i think about you all the time
how i'm yours and how your mine
when we ride the wind blows free
and you see me, for all i am

you are my best friend, my spiritual companion and anchor
when we ride on the dirt trails the wind through our hair sets us free

and i love u

come riding in the bush with me
on our bicycles of love
gears that interact in subtle ways
like the complications of our love

i think about you all the time
how i'm yours and how your mine
when we ride the wind blows free
and you see me, for all i am

you are my best friend, my spiritual companion and anchor
when we ride on the dirt trails the wind through our hair sets us free

and i love u

when we are riding our bikes through the bush
with the wind in our hair, life feels so fair

These are some lyrics I wrote about my primary school sweetheart I eventually grew up to marry. :) We used to ride bikes together in the small town we grew up, i've used this in a song for our country band.

[camdizzle]

I saw "i love u" and stopped reading it. If you want to be taken seriously as a writer, at least spell out words like 'you.'

Edit:

That was pretty harsh, but seriously, man. Anyway, it's ok. Pretty cheesy, but I guess you could pull it off with the right music. Be a little more creative too with your phrasing. There are a lot of cliches in there.

[Meatplow]

****n terrible :(

the allegory is ridiculous