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TrentGoesToHollywood
01-02-2008, 01:27 PM
Song #2
http://www.megaupload.com/?d=LX24F57F
(the beginning vocals are sketchy and there are strange clicks in the first verse. please listen, though.)


I'll just get high in hope
that you'll never come back and I'll
live my life without keeping track
of anything i do, any memory of you
I'll let them get so lost they can never be found
again.

I'll get so high, i will be above
any thoughts that may
remind me of love
I will let them die
As they jump for my feet
no, nothing will pull me down
Because i am in the sky.

And when i come down there'll be nothing around
and when i exhale with that sighing sound
the smoke will clear, the bridge will be burnt to the ground.
...so i can ever go back and you'll never catch up
to turn me around and remind me of
the way that you're smile returns my warmth
thats been gone since the second my feet left the earth
in a selfish attempt to push everything down
and you don't have to tell me
that you're still around
'cause i know it didn't work
and it's time to face the truth...

I'll get so high, i will be above
any thoughts that may
remind me of love
I will let them die
As they jump for my feet
no, nothing will pull me down
Because i am in the sky.


... this song is sort of a follow up to the first one (witch I've decided will be called The End Of Everything).
... i would love some feedback on this one because i think it's more intelligently written than TEoE. so what do you think?

camdizzle
01-02-2008, 07:09 PM
Much better. Anyone can sing about a break up and make it personal. The key is to write it in a way that's your own.

TrentGoesToHollywood
01-05-2008, 11:56 PM
wow, thanks man. did you listen to it by chance?