Peaches and Lowfat Butter

[jxeboy]

Hey all.
Today my band (Photons on High) let me put up one of our new songs, because i said i could probely get some people to see how it was written. I normally don't post that music here, because i don't right most of it, but the guitarist (aka the person who wrote the song) is looking for some songwriting feedback. The song is called "Peaches and Lowfat Butter" (I know original!) and you can listen to it at

http://www.myspace.com/photonsonhigh
http://www.soundclick.com/photonsonhigh

Thanks for any and all feedback

~jake

[EvilDoer5150]

wow you guys sound really cool. I really liked everything about the song. The bass was excellent throughout the whole song. I especially liked the keyboard/guitar solo, that part was really cool. And those little countryish sounding breaks in the song were really cool.

By songwriting feedback did you mean in terms of lyrics or just the overall structure of the song? Well, either way the song structure is really cool and interesting and the lyrics, while nothing really special they fit the music perfectly and I really like them.

I listened to some of the other songs too and they're all good, I like your sound a lot, it's really cool.

If you wanna tell me what you think of my stuff go here...
http://www.musicianforums.com/forums/showthread.php?t=545934

[humbuckermagic]

Great stuff. Very fun. Ear candy.
If I were to knitpick, the piano solo is a tad choppy and bland compared to the song, but, I don't hate it. I just hear a soaring guitar or sax.
All in all, its an excellent composition and song.